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那,莫名得激动 一年,两年......上大学一年了,距离那个最痛的日子两年了,因为触碰感情,所以记忆深刻.....这一年,发生了很多事,我长大了。不是我想要长大而是这个社会要求我必须长大。 还记得,大一刚入学我救成功的当选了班长,然而忙碌的生活,让我渐渐淡忘了我最初的梦想.....可是这种忙碌并没有麻木了我的伤痛。大一下学期,我又成功的竞选成了学生会主席。我就这样越爬越高,可是我的脾气也越来越不好。经常乱发脾气,同学都叫我“女王”。我说一 ,就没有人敢说二。我成功的把每一个人踩在脚下,我站在最高处,以为那里会有最美的景色,可是,我看到的却是我一路走来的伤痕累累。我早就已经习惯做什么都要坚强,而且两年前的一天,我已经把我一生要流的泪水,留干了!我早已淡忘流泪的滋味! 有时候,我真的很累。

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One, two ...... college a year from the day that the most pain for two years, because to touch feelings, memories ..... so this year, there were a lot of things, I grow up. I did not want this community to grow up but I have to grow up.Remember, I saved the success of newly enrolled freshman elected the squad leader, but the busy life, allowed me to forget my original dream of ..... But this busy and did not numb my pain. Great semester, I became a student council election success. So the more the higher I climb, but my temper more and more bad. Frequent temper tantrums, the students call me "The Queen." I say one, no one can say two. I put the success of each individual step on the foot, I stood on the highest point, that there will be the most beautiful scenery, but I can see is bruised along the way I am. I have long been accustomed to do what must be strong, but one day two years ago, I have put my life tears to flow, to stay dry! I had forgotten the taste of tears! Sometimes, I am really tired.
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这里还有用母语写作文的。。

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