The Teatro Colón was chosen as the best theatre in the world
Pride of Latin-American culture, the Teatro Colón situated in Buenos Aires, Argentina, was chosen as the best opera stage in the world according to the Italian website Travel 365. This website dedicates to spread experiences, information and news about tourism. On this occasion, the website published an article about the 15 most important opera house all over the world. The Teatro Colón was at the top of this ranking above other theatres such as La Scala of Milan and The Royal Opera House of London. This ranking was elaborated by specialists and people who had visited the theatres. This award incentives tourists to visit the theatre.
Reputation is built with the artists who have performed in it. On one occasion, the famous tenor Luciano Pavarotti said: " The Teatro Colón has an important defect: its acoustics is perfect. So if you make a mistake, everybody notices it".
Ranking of Theatres: https://www.travel365.it/classifica-teatri-piu-belli-importanti-mondo.htm
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Ranking of Theatres: https://www.travel365.it/classifica-teatri-piu-belli-importanti-mondo.htm
(1) I would prefer to use present tense because it is a fact. Further, "rank " will be much reasonable when compared with other objects at the same time .
(2) "incentive" can be noun or adjective, not verbal. You can use either "stimulate" or "attract"
Hola, Azucena. Well done! I just want to offer you different ways of describing the same sentence.
Keep writing. Every effort will be paid off.
(3) Another suggestion: You can describe more detail about the surrounding of the theatre , why it is outpassed than other theatres, for example, its marvelous building or interior echo design.
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Very good!
The Teatro Colón was chosen as the best theat(re)er in the world.
Pride of Latin-American culture, the Teatro Colón located situated in Buenos Aires, Argentina, was chosen as the best opera stage in the world according to the Italian website Travel 365. This website dedicates to spread experiences, information and news about tourism. On this occasion, the website published an article about the 15 most important opera houses from around all over the world. The Teatro Colón was at the top of this ranking above other theatres such as La Scala of Milan and The Royal Opera House of London. This ranking was prepared/done elaborated by specialists and people who had visited these theatres. This award will motivate incentives tourists to visit the theat(re)er.The reputation is built by the experience of/praises from with the artists who have performed in it. On one occasion, the famous tenor Luciano Pavarotti said: " The Teatro Colón has an important defect: its acoustics is perfect. So if you make a mistake, everybody notices it".
Ranking of Theatres: https://www.travel365.it/classifica-teatri-piu-belli-importanti-mondo.htm
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