Religions in Vietnam
Hello everyone. My name is Diep. I”m from Vietnam.Today, I want to talk about religions in Vietnam. My country has many different types of religion. There are the buddhism, the roman Catholicism , The Islam, The Hinduism and the Judaiism. But the buddhism, the roman Catholicism is the most popular. That is 2 creeds no strangely with my country. It is very special and It was believe by the humans Vietnam. The buddhism is a solemn religion . This is the tranquil place and has many buddhist monk, they are the vegetarians.It help everyone can pray a good everything for their relatives, friends and their’s. In Vietnam all people do volunteer work at a temple. They will visit to the temple in 1th and 15th everymonth. They want to do things nice for everyone's life. They are very love people. They often do the charity. We usually say they are bodhisattvas. They usually smile in the life. And the roman catholicism is a religion of the God. The people believe it, they will believe Jusus christ, when they die they will be on the Heaven. They believe that the creaators will help a nice life. The feature of the roman catholicism is the church. The roman catholicism will take place on the Sunday of everyweek in the church. This is the confession for everyone mistake. The feature of it is the holy cross. The roman catholicism have the great festival , this is Christmas. This is really a wonderful holiday. The weather become to cold . It begin for a spring and a new year.
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Pleased to meet, you, Diep. Might I make a few corrections?
Hello everyone. My name is Diep. I'm from Vietnam.Today, I want to talk about religion - it's a general topic, so you don't need to make it plural in Vietnam (or: the religions of Vietnam) My country has many different types of religion. There is buddhism, __ Catholicism , __ Islam, __ Hinduism and __ Judaiism, use a comma here, you want to link these two thoughts but __ buddhism and Roman Catholicism are the most popular. That is 2 creeds no strangely with my country. It is very special and It was believe by the humans Vietnam not sure what you mean here. Can you rephrase? Tell me in different words and I'll help you out. __ Buddhism is a solemn religion. This is a tranquil place and has many buddhist monks, they are __ vegetarians. It helps that everyone can pray for good __ for their relatives, friends and so forth. In Vietnam, all people do volunteer work at a temple. They will visit to the temple on the 1st and 15th every month. They want to do nice things for everyone's life. They are very lovely people. They often do charity. We usually say they are bodhisattvas. They usually smile in __ life. Roman catholicism is a religion of the God. The people believe it, they ___ believe in Jesus Christ, and when they die they will be in Heaven. They believe that God will create a nice life. The feature of Roman Catholicism is the church. Their worship will take place on the Sunday of every week in Church. This is confession for everyone's mistakes. The feature of it is the holy cross. Roman Catholicism has the great festival of Christmas. This is really a wonderful holiday. The weather becomes too cold. It begins spring and the new year.The mistake you're making consistently is the use of the article "the" in front of things that don't need it. Unlike in other languages, English doesn't use articles a whole lot. You can usually omit them for general topics and abstract concepts like religions, behaviors, etc. I'm sure there's a concrete rule that I never learned—this article might help with knowing when to use them:
https://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/lessons/how-use-articles
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