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Bright star Bright star is written by John keats who lives in the 19th centruy.It is a great poesy.The film is based on the romantic story of John Keats . Would I were stedfast as thou art-- Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night And watching, with eternal lids apart, Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite, The moving waters at their priestlike task Of pure ablution round earth's human shores, Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask Of snow upon the mountains and the moors-- No--yet still stedfast, still unchangeable, Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast, To feel for ever its soft fall and swell, Awake for ever in a sweet unrest, Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath, And so live ever--or else swoon to death That is the poem -Bright star ... Life is a long journey with joy and sadness..All we should to do is living the way you love and love the life you live .we have not enough time to waste .

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Bright Star

Bright star is was written by John keats who lives lived in the 19th centruy.  It is a great poesy poem.The film is based on the romantic story of John Keats.


Would I were stedfast as thou art--
Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night
And watching, with eternal lids apart,
Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite,
The moving waters at their priestlike task
Of pure ablution round earth's human shores,
Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask
Of snow upon the mountains and the moors--
No--yet still stedfast, still unchangeable,
Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast,
To feel for ever its soft fall and swell,
Awake for ever in a sweet unrest,
Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath,
And so live ever--or else swoon to death
That is the poem -Bright star ...
Life is a long journey with joy and sadness..

All We should to do is living live the way you we1 love and love the life you we live.  We don't  have not enough time to waste.

1.  Either use all "we" or all "you".  You need to be consistent.

You leave 2 spaces after the period and NOT a space before it.  You are writing in English, so follow the English style instead of Chinese.

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Try and see if you can see the film about the life of Keats. it's also called Bright Star.

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