中国明朝
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Ming dynasty governed China for 276 years, and it is described as one of the greatest ordered and stable time in people's history. In that era, the development of manufacture boosted the market economic and urbanization. Multiple of commodities including wine and silk sold in market. Meanwhile China imported many exotic goods, such as time clock and tabacco. Some big business center like Beijing, Najing, Yanzhou and Suzhou appeared one by one. It also occurred in Ming dynasty that the fleet were leaded by Zhenghe took seven large scale expenditures to The Indian Ocean. It is deserved to mention that three classical masterpieces of "Four Classic" in China lecture were created in Ming dynasty.
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中国明朝 谢谢大家 帮忙看看错误哦
The Ming dynasty governed China for 276 years, and it is described as one of the greatest most ordered and stable times in people's history. In that era, the development of manufacture boosted the market economic markets and urbanization. Multiple of commodities including wine and silk were sold in markets. Meanwhile China imported many exotic goods, such as time clocks and tabacco. Some big business centers like Beijing, Najing, Yanzhou and Suzhou appeared one by one. It also occurred in Ming dynasty that the fleet that were was leaded by Zhenghe took seven large scale expenditures to The Indian Ocean. It is deserved to worth* mention that three classical masterpieces of "Four Classics" in Chinese lecture literature were created in the Ming dynasty.* or - That three classical masterpieces of "Four Classics" in Chinese literature were created in the Ming dynasty also deserves mentioning
Much better than the last writing. I especially liked the expression "appeared one by one".
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