HELL AND HEAVEN
I once deeply suspected myself, wondering in the desert; never bear, whatever sowed,
Just opened wings, but wind calmed down, ; does it count harvest to accustom to misery
Fortunately, never hold back;finally found, oasis really being there
Every perspiration was shed, life got heavy;only saw the new universe,after walked out of frustration
hell and heaven, after the bravery;let my perseverance break the fate shackle down
Aloof people, thank you for belittling me,arouse me more excellent to live,
Standing by windows in the dawn time, I kept up for the whole night, seeing the sun emerged from the clouds,
Sundown is incubation, sunup is maturity;sun always give off its light,
Hell and heaven, after the furious rainstorm; turn around, farewell and smell to the gone poignancy
People understanding me, really appreciate your accompanying all the way
Let me have good stories to tell,behold, the future is coming step by step.
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There are no corrections with poetry. There is nothing to correct with this, it's too beautiful. It was very good, vanwaider. I especially liked this from your entry: " let my perseverance break the fate shackle down". Thank you for sharing your beautiful piece. It's a work of art.
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here comes the poet!!! haha
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