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To whom it may concern
I am writing this email to register a noise complaint of Rebecca Park. I am living in 5637 Bristol street, Mississauga,ON. My house's backyard is facing the Rebecca Park and recently there are increasing noises at night in the park area.
A bunch of students start coming to the park at night to dance,laugh,talk, sing and sometime even play musics from last week. I guess it's because they are currently on their summer holiday so they may have tons of free time at night. However, my occupation is customer service and my working hour is from 6am to 3pm. So I need to sleep at 9pm and get up at 5am to ensure I could begin my work on time and have enough energy to complete my work. Unfortunately the noise caused me wake up a lot at night and I felt pretty tired during my working time. I already tried to talk to those students but no use.
I suggest to put a new sign in the park to ban the noise after 8PM. Thereby every one not only me but also a lot of senior people in our neighbourhood can have a good environment to rest.
Regards
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To whom it may concernI am writing this email to register a noise complaint of about Rebecca Park. I am living in at 5637 Bristol street, Mississauga,ON. My house's The backyard of my house 1* is facing the faces Rebecca Park and recently there are has been increasing noises levels at night in the park area.
A bunch of students start coming to the park at night to dance,laugh,talk, sing and sometime even play musics from last week. I guess it's because they are currently on their summer holiday so they may have tons lots2* of free time at night. However, my occupation is customer service and my working hours is are from 6am to 3pm. So I need to sleep at 9pm and get up at 5am to ensure I could begin my work on time and have enough energy to complete my work. Unfortunately the noise has caused me wake up a lot at night and I felt pretty tired during my working time. I already tried to talk to those students but no use without any result.
I suggest to putting a new sign in the park to ban the noise after 8PM. Thereby every one not only me I but also a lot of senior people in our neighbourhood can have a good environment to rest in.
Regards
1* the "'s" possessive is usually for people.
2* 'tons of' is too informal.
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