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Tiroteo en Alabama, EE.UU. (1)
La familia de Bradford dijo que él tenía una licencia para llevar un arma oculta. Ellos han exigido que los oficiales les den el video del tiroteo de Bradford. Debido a esto, hay muchas protestas en la ciudad hoy.
Muy bien. Las correcciones en negrita (bold) son importantes, mientras que las que están en cursiva (italics) son sugerencias.
(1) According to Fundéu BBVA, the proper abbreviation for the United States in Spanish is either "EE.UU." or "EUA"
(2) According to Fundéu BBVA, you should write "Acción de Gracias" with initial capital letters since it is a proper noun. Writing "Día de" is optional, but more common.
https://fundeu.do/accion-de-gracias-mejor-que-thanksgiving/
(3) Writing a noun without a preceding article or adjective like you did in this sentence sounds a bit odd in Spanish, even though you'll be perfectly understood.
(4) The verb "morir" can be used as reflexive ("morirse") or intransitive (not reflexive). But, on the news or the newspaper you would normally hear/read the intransitive form.
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