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The River is dangerous !! I went to the River for BBQ. and it was soooo humid. we went into the water of the river. The firet time the guy has started been drained, and I grabbed his leg, but I also has been drained.... but actually the guy is Emergency lifesaving man, so he standed up by himself. and I falled him,then we could went out ourselves. but I felt it was really dangerous, even the river was shallow. we nearly gonna be die. ;P lol Actually I can't laughing. I really felt the Nature is strong.

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Note: I am not sure what you meant by "drained". Did you mean he fell in the river, or did you think he was drowning? It's difficult to correct this part. Also, what do you mean by "I falled him"?

The River is dangerous !!

I went to the River for a BBQ and it was soooo humid. We went into the water of the river.
The first time the guy has started been drained fell, and I grabbed his leg, but I also had been drained fell.... but actually the guy is a Emergency lifesaving man lifeguard, so he stood up by himself.
and I falled him,then we could went get out ourselves on our own.

but I felt it was really dangerous, even though the river was shallow.
we nearly gonna be died ;P lol
Actually I shouldn't be can't laughing.
I really felt the Nature is strong how strong Nature is.

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