Could please anyone give me any feedback about a practice IELTS writing test that I wrote? Here is a "mock up" ielts writing test taken from the task 2 that I wrote today and this is the Iink to know what the task is about : https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/prepare-test/practice-tests/writing-practice-test-1-general-training I would be grateful to you if anyone could go over it and give me some feeback as well as score it based on the IELTS band score so that I can have a roughly idea about my writing level. Thanks a lot. Thanks to technologies the access to knowledge from home has become so easy nowadays that parents start thinking more and more about teaching their children at home. There appear to be advantages on both side of the spectrum. Firstly, by teaching home it would allow parents to focus thoroughly on subjects they would like their children to learn. Another interesting upside to point out is the amount of time, shared between children and parents, might develop strong bonds with one another, and as a result could lead to a more peaceful environment. On top of that a tremendous amount of money could also be saved as no canteen fees would be involved. However, teaching in schools brings positive effects to children that sometimes can't be provided anywhere else. For instance, professionalism as well as the ability to teach efficiently are part of the factors that shouldn't be neglected as it is vital for children to evolve in a healthy and safe environment. additionally, It is very important that children get accustomed to interact with other human being so that they can socialize themselves and be able to fit in effortlessly, find a job and eventually raise a family. In my view, those two different ways of teaching should be considered as complementary and also seen as a reminder that, even though children go to school, education shouldn't be overlooked as it is an ongoing process and that it needs to be paid attention to even outside schools. On the other hand, parents who teach from home should also ensure that their children practice team activities regularly. By doing so, I believe a good balance could be found.