The autumn this year
Early autumn was amazing this year. Usually, it is rainy and cold in our area. It was so in the previous year and a year before it. But it was not so this year. All things were different. It was warm and sunny. In the middle of September, I had got a vacation and went fishing for a week. I lived in a tent on the shore of a large lake. I was fishing, cooked the meal on the fire. That was great. The weather was so warm that I was swimming in the lake. I like fishing. It is my hobby and I often spend vacation or holidays in the wilderness. But sooner or later all good ends and my vacation ended too. An about a month and a half had passed and the weather is getting colder and colder, the rains started, the cold wind blew out. I do not like this time of year, but the winter is getting closer. Soon a snow will be fallen and the ground will be covered with a soft white blanket. But it will be another story.
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The Autumn this year.
Early autumn was amazing this year. Usually, it is rainy and cold in our area. It was so in the previous year and the year before it. However, it was not so this year. All things were different. It was warm and sunny. In the middle of September, I had gotten a vacation and went fishing for a week. I lived in a tent on the shore of a large lake. I was fishing, cooked the meal on the fire. That was great. The weather was so warm that I was swimming in the lake. I like fishing. It is my hobby and I often spend vacation or holidays in the wilderness. But Sooner or later though all good things ends and my vacation ended too. An About a month and a half had passed and the weather was getting colder and colder, the rains started, the cold wind blew in. I do not like this time of year, but the winter is getting closer. Soon a snow will be falling and the ground will be covered with a soft white blanket. However, that is another story.In English we always try our best not to start a sentence with but or and. It's unfortunately not grammatically correct. Really well written though and I hope this is help to you :)
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The autumn this year
Early autumn was amazing this year. Usually, it is rainy and cold in our area. So it was last year and the year before that. But it was not so this year. All things were different. It was warm and sunny. In the middle of September, I had a vacation and went fishing for a week. I lived in a tent on the shore of a large lake. I was fishing and cooked on the fire. That was great. The weather was so warm that I was swimming in the lake. I like fishing. It is my hobby and I often spend vacation or holidays in the wilderness. But sooner or later all good things end and my vacation ended too. About a month and a half has (now) passed and the weather is getting colder and colder, the rains have started, the cold winds blow. I do not like this time of year, but the winter is getting closer. Soon the snow will fall* and the ground will be covered with a soft white blanket. But that is another story.*or your -- soon a snowfall will be fallen.
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Very well written!
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