*I am correcting your entry using a slightly 'philosophical' tone. You may encounter some atarashii tango!*

About myself:

Hello to everyone using itaki!

I am Takumi, and I reside in Japan. I'm majoring in philosophy at Sophia University, which is run by the Society of Jesus. Although I am not a Christian, I love to read The Bible and I respect Jesus himself. (An alternative might be: "Although I am not a Christian, I enjoy reading the bible and I am intrigued by the character of Jesus". English let's you be very specific about your thoughts, so try a be very accurate!)

My motivation to study English comes from my desire to go to an American graduate school. Because of this, I must study not only conversational English, but also the way to express my thoughts in philosophical discourse.

My hobbies include travelling, playing music, talking with my friends, swimming, and so on.

Please be my friend and talk with me!! ;)

about myself

hi everyone using italki!
I am Takumi living in Japan. 
I'm majoring in philosophy at Sophia University which is run by the Society of Jesus. 
I'm not Christian but I love reading The Bible and I respect Jesus himself.
I am studying English because I want to go to an American graduate school.
So I must study not only English but the way to express my opinion in the discussion of philosophy.

great intro! :)

good luck!

My hobbies are traveling, playing music, talking with my friends, swimming, and so on.
Be my friend and talk with me!! ;)

about myself

hi everyone using itaki!
I am Takumi living in Japan
I'm majoring philosophy at Sophia University which is run by the Society of Jesus,
I'm not Christian but love to read The Bible and respect Jesus himself.
The reason i am studying English comes from my wish to go to American graduate school,
so i must study not only English but also the way to express my opinion in the discussion of philosophy.

My hobbies are traveling, playing music, talking with my friends, swimming, and so on.
Be my friend and talk with me!! ;)