People’s ability communicate has suffered since the use of social media and devices.
With advanced technologies, the way we communicate have completely changed. The main point of concern is whether or not technologies affect our quality of conveying information. In this essay, I will try to argue the benefits and drawbacks brought by new devices and social media on our communication skills.
One of the disadvantage which often appears when we use social media and devices is the decrease of the quality of information. It is often said that intensive use of text messages leads to incredible information, such as the use of phonetic in replacement of words or abbreviations like BTW, RG and EOM…Moreover, information have to be double-checked or more to ensure their veracity. In our fast environment where everything must be quickly done, we cannot guarantee the quality of communication without wasting time.
On the other hand, we have to keep in mind that there are not only disadvantages to using advanced technologies to communicate. Nowadays, more people are aware of what happens in the world. For instance, rescue team and relief after disasters can be better organized by fast communication. Anyone can be witness of crime and heavelly weight during the trial with only a camera. Advanced technologies gather people in a certain way and could improve communication skills.
To conclude, I cannot take a stand position on this topic. I think quality of communication relies on the purpose of how we use social media and devices. We have to use our common sense to better communicate with these tools.
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With advanced technologies, the way we communicate have has completely changed. The main point of concern(The main consideration) is whether or not technologies affect our quality of conveying information(abilty to convey quality information ). In this essay, I will try to argue the benefits and drawbacks brought on by new devices and social media on (upon) our communication skills. One of the disadvantages which often appears when we use social media and devices is the decrease of in the quality of the information. It is often said that intensive use of text messages leads to incredible (?more dense) information, such as with the use of phonetics in for the replacement of words or abbreviations(acronyms )like BTW, RG and EOM…Moreover, information have has to be double-checked (or more) to ensure their veracity its accuracy. In our fast (moving or paced) environment where everything must be done quickly done, we cannot guarantee the quality of communication without wasting spending the time. On the other hand, we have to keep in mind that there are not only disadvantages to using advanced technologies to communicate. (On the other hand, we still have to consider more than just the disadvantages of these advanced technologies.)Nowadays, more people are aware of what happens in the world. For instance, rescue teams and relief organizations after disasters can be better organized by fast(rapid, quick) communication. Anyone can be witness of crime and heavelly weight during the trial with only a camera. (Anyone can be a witness to a crime and be called upon at a trial simply by owning a camera.) Advanced technologies gather people in a certain way and could improve communication skills. To conclude, I cannot take a stand position on this topic(...I can't argue one point of view entirely). I think that the quality of communication relies on the purpose of how for which we use social media and devices. We have to use our common sense to better communicate with these tools.
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