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About ice cream... Well, today I’m going to talk about ice cream. Do you like ice cream? I am sure, you do) I love it, too but where has it gone, the ice cream that makes me feel divine? I haven’t eaten such one since my childhood. You can argue, of course, like, sure, the grass is greener, the sky is brighter let alone ice cream which is surely sweeter in anyone’s childhood. But I’ll kindly let you with your skepticism and keep my sweet childhood memories. As a school girl I used to go by bike to the nearest ice cream café to buy some ice cream. I’ve always loved the kind which is called sundae (here we call it “plombirrrr”))))). Well, I used to buy not less than 2 kilos at once. They sold it in bulk, so I handed a plastic bag to the sales woman and she put ice cream into it generously pouring with syrup over. Then I went back home to place my catch into the fridge which then from time to time magneted me during the rest of the day. As years went on, things have changed and so has ice cream. Not only has it become more expensive (now I can only afford two ice cream cones), its taste has definitely worsened. Once I even had a sickness after eating ice cream. I think it’s because in my childhood ice cream was made from natural cream but now it is made from something-like-cream. Well, to sum up, obviously, life is becoming better and better, since these days I’m not at risk of obesity and can boast my perfect fitness)

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Well, today I’m going to talk about ice cream. Do you like ice cream? I am sure, you do) I love it, too but where has it gone, the ice cream that made me feel divine? I haven’t eaten such ice cream since my childhood. 

You can argue, of course, like, sure, the grass is greener, the sky is brighter let alone the ice cream, which is surely sweeter in anyone’s childhood. But I’ll kindly let you have your skepticism and keep my sweet childhood memories.


As a school girl I used to go by bike to the nearest ice cream parlor/shop to buy some ice cream. I’ve always loved the kind which is called a sundae (here we call it “plombirrrr”))))). Well, I used to buy no less than 2 kilos at once. They sold it in bulk, so I handed a plastic bag to the sales woman and she put ice cream into it generously pouring syrup over it. Then I went back home to put my catch into the fridge which then from time to time magneted(?) me during the rest of the day.


As years went on, things have changed and so has ice cream. Not only has it become more expensive (now I can only afford two ice cream cones), its taste has definitely worsened. Once I even got sick after eating ice cream. I think it’s because in my childhood ice cream was made from natural cream but now it is made from something-like-cream.


Well, to sum up, obviously, life is becoming better and better since these days I’m not at risk of obesity and can boast my perfect fitness)


Great writing! I think ice cream did taste better in the past, and sugar in general. 

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About ice cream...

Today I’m going to talk about ice cream.

Do you like ice cream? I'm sure you do. I love it too, but where has it gone? The ice cream that makes me feel divine? I haven’t eaten one like that since my childhood.
You could argue, of course, that the grass is greener, the sky is brighter and ice cream was sweeter in anyone’s childhood.But I’ll kindly let you with to skepticism and keep my sweet childhood memories.

As a school girl I used to go by bike to the nearest ice cream café to buy some ice cream. I’ve always loved the kind that is called sundae (here we call it “plombirrrr”). I used to buy more than 2 kilos at once. They sold it in bulk, so I handed a plastic bag to the sales woman and she put ice cream into it, generously pouring syrup over it. Then I went back home to place my catch in the fridge which then from time to time magneted  atracted me during the rest of the day.

As years went on, things have changed, and so has ice cream. Not only has it become more expensive (now I can only afford two ice cream cones), its taste has definitely worsened. Once I was even sick after eating ice cream. I think it’s because in my childhood ice cream was made from natural cream, but now it is made from fake cream or better: artificial cream.
Well, to sum up, life is becoming better and better these days of course: I’m not at risk of obesity and I can boast of my perfect fitness.

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hi nataly make correction in my text on the book. childhood in ipatinga

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