My First Composition

It This is my first composition here.  I am waiting in fear and trembling trepidation for the teachers' advices for advice from teachers.

Italki is a good place for somebody who wants to study and improve their language skills. better and better.At the same time, many more and more people make friends through this channel. So we'll this would be killing two birds with one stone.

I have had made some foreign friends here and we communicated exchanged our thoughts, improved our language level,shared our skills......They are not only my teachers but also my sincere friends! One day, if I can go around travel the world, I hope I can call on them with all of my sincerity.

Except for your punctuation mark spacing errors, you have a good grasp of the language basics.  However you need more work in expressing yourself in the "English" thought.  This can only be done through reading and writing and let others correct them.

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