Today's photo and my own fake story
In the picture, we can see a big eagle, that is ending its flight. It will stand on a stone, on the top of the green hill. It has just arrived from a little island, where it has been meeting with another eagle. They ate some raw food, mainly others animal that they cought. They usually meet in this island, because they can be there alone, and enjoy their own food.
This particular eagle wants to fly to this hills, because it was born in this place. He spend a lot of time flying above this gully, looking at people who walk every day in this gully. It is funny when see people scared when see it.
The landscape is amazing!
This pictures was downloaded on:https://www.theguardian.com/news/gallery/2018/sep/24/corbyn-cufflinks-and-a-bare-handed-winner-mondays-top-photos#img-14
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Today's photo and my own fake story
In the picture, we can see a big eagle, that is about to land ending its flight. It will land stand on a rock stone, on the top of the green hill. It has just arrived from a little island, where it has been meeting with another eagle. They ate some raw food, mainly others animal that they had caught cought. They usually come together meet on this island, because they can be there alone, and enjoy their own food.This particular eagle wants to fly to this hills, /OR these hills because it was born there in this place. He spends a lot of time flying above this valley gully, looking at watching people who walk there everyday in this gully. It is funny when see people are scared when they see it.
The landscape is amazing!
This pictures was downloaded from on:https://www.theguardian.com/news/gallery/2018/sep/24/corbyn-cufflinks-and-a-bare-handed-winner-mondays-top-photos#img-14
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In the picture, we can see a big eagle, that is ending its flight. It will stand on a stone, on the top of the green hill. It has just arrived from a little island, where it has been meeting with another eagle. They ate some raw food, mainly others animals that they cought caught. They usually meet in on this island, because they can be there alone, and enjoy their own food. This particular eagle wants to fly to this hills, because it was born in this place. He spends a lot of time flying above this gully, looking at people who walk here every day. in this gully. It is funny when see people are scared when they see it. The landscape is amazing! This pictures was downloaded on:https://www.theguardian.com/news/gallery/2018/sep/24/corbyn-cufflinks-and-a-bare-handed-winner-mondays-top-photos#img
You have a tendency to overuse commas here. As a general gramatical rule, if you are explaining a situation, using the word because, it is not neccesary to precede with a comma. Likewise the initial two commas you use at the begining of the text. Other than that, and a couple of minor gramatic and syntactic errors its perfect!
Claudia
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Today's photo and my own fake story
In the picture, we can see a big eagle, that is ending its flight. It will stand on a stone, on the top of the green hill. It has just arrived from a little island, where it has been meeting with another eagle. They ate some raw food, mainly others animal that they caught. They usually meet on this island, because they can be there alone, and enjoy their own food.This particular eagle wants to fly to this hills because it was born in this place. He spend a lot of time flying above this gully, looking at people who walk every day in this gully. It is funny when I see people scared when seeing it.
The landscape is amazing!
This picture was downloaded on:https://www.theguardian.com/news/gallery/2018/sep/24/corbyn-cufflinks-and-a-bare-handed-winner-mondays-top-photos#img-14
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Yes of course! I can say you many places to visit. We could talk better by iTalki messages.
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Hola Cristian, i knew it, it was Canary Islands. I love your place, I've been visiting Lanzarote and Gran Canaria twice this year and wish to visit Tenerife in 2019. I'll add you as language partner here so we will keep in touch :))
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