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Diary: Hokkaido Travel Day1-2 Please correct my sentences. Thank you.

【19th September, 2018】

On 6th Sep, there was a huge earthquake in Hokkaido.

However, Asahikawa got less damage. I was relieved.

An Only influence of the earthquake that I could see was purchase limit.

In a certain super market, a paste said "You can buy Natto(納豆) within two pack."

But even so, I felt Hokkaido had plenty of foods. Beef packs are bigger than Kanagawa Pref. one. Octopus feet was twice bigger than the supermarket that I often go. (Suprisingly, the place of Octopus feet was same!)

In the evening, I visited brewery.

Brewery is 酒造(Shuzou) in Japanese. The place to make sake.

My grandmother-in-law bought me a limited sake which was only sold in brewery. I thanked her.

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Diary: Hokkaido Travel Day1-2

Please correct my sentences. Thank you.

【19th September, 2018】

On 6th Sep, there was a huge earthquake in Hokkaido.

However, Asahikawa got less damage. I was relieved.

An Only influence of the earthquake that I could see was purchase limit. ( THE ONLY DIFFERENCE I NOTICED AFTER THE EARTHQUAKE WAS THE PURCHASE LIMIT ON GOODS IN THE SUPERMARKET).

In a certain super market, a paste (SIGN OR POSTER) said (READ) "You can buy Natto(納豆) within two pack." (PURCHASE OF NATTO IS LIMITED TO TWO PACKS PER PERSON).

But even so, I felt Hokkaido had plenty of food. (OUR) Beef packs are bigger than Kanagawa Pref. AND THE  Octopus feet ARE bigger (OR TWICE THE SIZE OF THE ONES SOLD IN) the supermarket that I often GO TO. (Suprisingly, the place WHERE Octopus feet WERE LOCATED was THE  same!)

In the evening, I visited A brewery.

A Brewery is 酒造(Shuzou) in Japanese. The place to make sake. (IT IS WHERE SAKE IS MADE).

My grandmother-in-law (??!) bought me a limited EDITION sake which was only sold in brewery. I thanked her.

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Diary: Hokkaido Travel Day1-2

Please correct my sentences. Thank you.

【19th September, 2018】

On 6th Sep, there was a huge earthquake in Hokkaido.

However, Asahikawa got less damage. I was relieved.

The only effect of the earthquake that I could see was a purchase limit.

In a certain supermarket, a paste [not sure what this means-- a sign?] said "You can buy up to two packs of Natto(納豆) within two pack."

But even so, I felt Hokkaido had plenty of foods. Beef packs are bigger than in Kanagawa Pref. one. Octopus tentacles cost twice as much as at the supermarket that I often go to. (Surprisingly, the place [price?] of Octopus tentacles was the same!)

In the evening, I visited a brewery.

Brewery is 酒造(Shuzou) in Japanese. The place to make sake.

My grandmother-in-law bought me a limited sake which was only sold in that brewery. I thanked her.

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