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First notebook entry: Introducing myself You are the child in southern country Own the clinging personality You are ignorant about sigil on your body. Suddenly you feel very very tired. Except lie in sofa, you don’t want to do anything. Then you know you are the person, more failure, more spunky. You exhaust all strength to seek your way. Every time, face to the failure. You told yourself, at least you are still alive. While the goal is coming, you have been fordone. Relax fully. All the way, you know what you want to get. You will achieve all step by step. Just nobody would prefer to trust you can do it. You have ever suspected your capability. How fortunately you ever give up. You know, you own the dream as if oath. Some people live by dream. Lose dream, as equal as lose life. This is a lost words times. You said the truth. but nobody would prefer to believe the true words. You no longer pour, let the heart get unalterable, more and more. You like the people like CoCo Chanel, a legend woman. own the same ramstam personality as you. create miracle in countless failure. Misunderstanding, losing love, loneliness, Shape a great woman. In the world, someone is doomed to finish her journey alone. Now, you just stand at jumping-off point. Future, can’t predict.

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Is it a poem?
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This is very interesting writing, I would not want to change any part of it, except ,perhaps the word" sigil which I assume should be signals"

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