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Urgent!!!!!Letter of recommendation for employee Hey, all my language friends! how is everything going! One of my intern(let just call him H) wants me to write him a LOR for his applying of graduate school, and obviously English isn't my native language and I want my letter to sound native and good so that I can help this young man achieve his dream. So now I need you guy's help, It would be fantastic if you could help me with my letter because I know there must be some words or sentences that aren't very clear or wrong and can be improved in another way. I really appreciated your help! H worked in the Design studio in Beijing as an industrial design intern throughout the winter of 2017. As his supervisor and design lead, I arranged him different tasks and worked several projects with him on a daily basis. I was consistently impressed by his initiative, passion, and professionalism. As an industrial designer in the studio, H's responsibilities are just like other other designers, including doing research at the beginning stage of the project, sketching ideas, CAD modeling making and rendering for final presentation. During that time, he fully precipitated in two projects in a period of two months. The first client he encountered was a startup AR company called Pie-Digital, and the goal was to design an AR interaction table. Although he has no experience in designing in real industrial life, he was able to learn things and combine with the knowledge and skills he learned very quickly. He did a very useful research about the client’s demand, restriction, and existing products for the team, and providing plenty of concept sketching for initial product ideation later on. With the help and instructions of mine and a senior designer, he successfully built his own CAD model and was selected by the client out of three design. H gradually became an important member of the ID team and gave 100% effort in the work. He consistently produces a high standard of work and is among one of the most potential interns I have ever worked with. Despite the fact that he had to go back to school in the middle of the second project, he completed his design of a pet ICU unit with the requirement and high detail. As you can tell by now, he is a talented young designer driven by a passion for creating and detail. Therefore, I am proud to say that H would be the ideal candidate for your program. Please feel free to contact me if you need additional information or perspective.

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H worked in the Design studio in Beijing as an industrial design intern throughout the winter of 2017. As his supervisor and design lead, I arranged him different tasks and worked several projects with him on a daily basis. I was consistently impressed by his initiative, passion, and professionalism.

As an industrial designer in the studio, H's responsibilities are just like any other designer, including doing research at the beginning stage of the project, sketching ideas, CAD modeling, making, and rendering for final presentation. During that time, he fully participated in two projects over a period of two months. The first client he encountered was a startup AR company called Pie-Digital, and the goal was to design an AR interaction table. Although he had no experience in designing in real industrial life, he was able to learn things and combine with the knowledge and skills he learned very quickly. He did a very useful research about the client’s demand, restriction, and existing products for the team, and providing plenty of concept sketching for initial product ideation later on. With the help and instructions of mine and a senior designer, he successfully built his own CAD model and was selected by the client out of three design.
H gradually became an important member of the ID team and gave 100% effort in the work. He consistently produced a high standard of work and is among one of the most potential interns I have ever worked with. Despite the fact that he had to go back to school in the middle of the second project, he completed his design of a pet ICU unit with the requirement and high detail.

As you can tell by now, he is a talented young designer driven by a passion for creating and detail. Therefore, I am proud to say that H would be the ideal candidate for your program. Please feel free to contact me if you need additional information or perspective.


(There might be a couple other grammatical mistakes but here is a few I caught and good luck!)

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Letter of Recommendation

H worked with my company as an industrial design intern throughout the winter of 2017. As his supervisor and design lead, I assigned different tasks to, and worked several projects beside, him on a daily basis. I was consistently impressed by his initiative, passion, knowledge, and professionalism.

As an intern in the design studio, H's responsibilities were similar to other designers: doing research at the beginning stage of the project, sketching ideas, CAD model-making, and rendering for the final presentation. During that time, he fully participated in two major projects under my direction over a period of two months. The first client project that he worked on was for a startup AR company called Pie-Digital, and the goal was to design an AR interaction table.

Although he had no prior experience in designing in real time, he was able to figure things out on his own, and when combined with the knowledge and skills he possessed, he managed to adapt and to learn techniques rather quickly. He performed extremely time-saving research about the client’s needs, restrictions, and its existing products for the team, as well as also provided plenty of conceptual sketches for the initial product ideation later on. With the help and guidance of both a senior designer and I, he not only successfully built his own CAD model, but it also eventually turned out to be the one finally selected by the client out of three designs we had presented.

H gradually became an important, trusted, and respected member of the ID team, and was seen as someone who always gave his full attention and effort to his tasks. He consistently produced a high standard of work and is, without question, one of the interns with the most potential that I have ever worked with. In spite of the fact that he had to return to school in the middle of the second project, he still managed to complete his design of a pet ICU unit which not only was submitted in high detail, but also included all the necessary requirements.

As you can probably tell by now, he is a young, but talented and conscientious Industrial Designer. Whatever assistance that I or you can give to him in reaching his future goals would be firmly warranted and well-deserved. Therefore, I have no hesitation in recommending H as an ideal candidate for your program.

 Please feel free to contact me should you need additional information or further perspective.

Hi Simon. Good job! A bit out of my league since I know nothing of ID, but I tried. Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound better to my native ears. I hope that this helps you both! J. 

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