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This is my first text, and today is a very special day for me. My best girlfriend is in the spital already, and her baby girl can be born any time. We have an old friendship, even from our childhood. I haven't got a sister, but she is for me like a sister. She is a strong woman, exemplar for me. I am very happy and proud of her and I wish all the best to her and her little family!
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First text
This is my first text, and today is a very special day for me. My best girlfriend is in the hospital already, and her baby girl can could be born at any time. We have an old long friendship, even starting from our childhood. I haven't got a sister, but she is for me like a sister to me. She is a strong woman, exemplar a role model for me. I am very happy and proud of her and I wish all the best to her and her little new family!Gratulálok! Nagyon jó!
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A special day! Here are a few suggestions about sentence structure and word choice.
First Text
I am writing my first text on a very special day. My best girlfriend is in the hospital ready to give birth to her baby girl. We have a long friendship that goes back to our childhood. I haven't got a sister, but for me, she is like a sister. She is a strong woman; a good example for me. I am very proud and happy for her and wish her and little family all the best!Hope this helps
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Congratulations) It's starting the new interesting part of her life) My BF's baby is three month now) I was incredible happy then I was walking with him)
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