Your Inner Beauty

False Fake eyelashes, false faux hair pieces and false fingernails! These days I have noticed that a lot of many women are now enhancing their faces and bodies looks 1 with such things like that. What happened? I am not sure really sure.

They said it's for the sake of enhancing your assets. They claimed that it is for image enhancement but  And I asked,

"How can you enhance something that you are covering hiding in the first place?"

Sure, by having these things attached to yourself can do make you look "pretty" but at the same time, it's nothing but imposing projecting a false image glamour of yourself.

Ladies! Don't do not believe everything you see in the magazines, or on television or on the internet. They are staged to convince you that "this is the ideal beauty" when in fact it is not. Haven't you realized how these pictures make you feel ugly? They have this certain impact that makes This is to psych you in wanting  want to be like that person in the picture. Have you noticed realize you were starving yourself just because you want to become like that one person in the magazine? You spent time getting thin on dieting and or wearing so much make-up that you don't seem to even recognize yourself anymore. Maybe you are not aware of it conscientiously but unconsciously, you somehow do, subconsciously. And this, This is not what real beauty is all about. This is not the way it's supposed to be.

Real beauty should come from within. It should radiate from you. Who cares if your are not a size 1 or 2? Some men do and you are only doing it for them not for yourself! Be happy because that you are created differently. Real beauty is about how you see things; how you react to them; how you feel about them. It is how you see yourself;  it is how you see others!  It's not all about concentrating on yourself alone. Real beauty is something that should glow within you and - not something that consumes you. Beauty is being happy and contented with who you are. It's not about false fake and artificial things.  They don't last. The one that you have inside you is the real beauty that can go on and on even if after your time on earth is through.

This is my opinion. Just saying out loud to let some steam out! :]

Great piece of writing.  Except for some wording needed to be polish...  Your essay is the best I have corrected for Mainland Chinese.  You have the mechanics of the language down to pat.

1.  Or you can say, "... enhancing themselves with such things..."

Dear A. Jed,

Overall, your entry was excellent and got to the heart of the issue. I do have a few comments that may help you as you work on improving your English skills.

 These days I have noticed that a lot of women are now enhancing their faces and bodies with things like that.  It would be better to say "enhancing their faces and bodies with this type of thing."

I am not sure really.  You should say "I am not really sure."   

They said it's for the sake of enhancing your assets.   It´s better to say " They said it´s for the sake of enhancing their features." Assets generally refer to money, although it is ok to use it in this situation if you are refering to attraction. 

And I asked, "How can you enhance something that you are covering in the first place?" 

Sure, having these things attached to yourself can make you look "pretty" but at the same time, it's nothing  they are doing nothing but imposing  creating  a false image of your appearance.

Ladies, do not believe everything you see in the magazines or television or internet. They are staged  deceiving and try  to convince you that "this is the ideal beauty" when in fact it is not.

Haven't you realized how these pictures make you feel ugly? They impact you in such a way that makes you want to be like that person in the picture.

Have you noticed that you are starving yourself just because you want to become like that one person in the magazine? You spend time getting thin or wear so much make-up that you don't seem to recognize yourself anymore. Maybe you are not aware but unconsciously, you somehow do. And this, this is not what real beauty is all about. This is not the way it's supposed to be. 

Real beauty should come from within. It should radiate from you. Who cares if your are not a size 1 or 2? Be happy because you are created differently. Real beauty is about how you see things, how you react to them, and how you feel about them. It is how you see yourself. It is how you see others. It's not all about concentrating on yourself.

Real beauty is something that should glow within you and not consume you. (I think I understand what you are getting at here, but it could use more explanation.) Beauty is being happy and contented with who you are. It's not about false and artificial things. They don't last.

The beauty  that you have inside you is the real beauty that can go on and on even if  when your time on earth is through.

This is my opinion.  I´m just saying it out loud. :]