Why do I feel sleepy all the time?
I have been exhausted recently. I have to work for 8 hours on working day. When I get home from work, I don't want to do anything. Usually, I go to bed around 6 pm after a quick shower. Then I wake up at 8 pm.
I get something for dinner and go to bed again. Spend a few hours in bed watching TV series or my phone.
When I get up in the morning, I still feel very tired.
It must be something wrong with my biological clock.
What can I do?
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Why do I feel sleepy all the time?
I have been exhausted recently. I have to work for 8 hours on working day. When I get home from work, I don't want to do anything. Usually, I go to bed around 6 pm after a quick shower. Then I wake up at 8 pm.I get something for dinner and go to bed again. Spend a few hours in bed watching TV series or my phone.
When I get up in the morning, I still feel very tired.
It must be something wrong with my biological clock.
What can I do?
This is how I would edit it:
I have been exhausted recently. I have to work for 8 hours on work days. When I get home from work, I don't want to do anything. I usually go to bed around 6 pm after a quick shower. Then, I wake up at 8 pm. I get something for dinner and go to bed again. I spend a few hours in bed watching TV series or on my phone. When I get up in the morning, I still feel very tired. It must be something wrong with my biological clock. What can I do?
It didn't need much editing at all. Well done! I'm sorry you're so tired! Maybe you shouldn't drink caffeine. I had to quit caffeine so I could sleep better. Take care!
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