Could some please correct this.It's my first attempt at writing Chinese.
(My name is Amit.I am an Indian.I want to learn Chinese.I have used the computer and the cell phone for the past six months to learn Chinese.I want to improve my Chinese.This is the first time I am writing Chinese.
我的名字是Amit。我是印度人。我想学习汉语。我六月用电脑和手机学习了汉语。我想提高我的汉语.这是第一次我在写汉语。
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Could some please correct this.It's my first attempt at writing Chinese.
(My name is Amit.I am an Indian.I want to learn Chinese.I have used the computer and the cell phone for the past six months to learn Chinese.I want to improve my Chinese.This is the first time I am writing Chinese.我的名字是Amit。我是印度人。我想学习汉语。我用电脑和手机学习汉语六个月了。我想提高我的汉语.这是我第一次用汉语写（文章）。
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Hi Amit,
我的名字是Amit。我是印度人。我想学习汉语。
我六月用电脑和手机学习了汉语。
I'm not quite sure what you mean here.
if you are saying 1) I learned Chinese through my computer and cell phone in June, you can say: 我(在)六月时(time marker)用～
or your intention is to show 2) I've learned Chinese for 6 months thru~, you can say: 我用～学习汉语学了六个月了
我想提高我的汉语水平/shui3 ping3/: level or 程度/cheng2 du4/.
这是第一次我在写汉语。 The sentence emphasizes this is your first time "writing in Chinese" instead of an ongoing event that you are writing in Chinese at this moment. Thus 在 is unnecessary here. If you have a question about writING, please contact me without hesitating.
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印度电影很好看啊
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