Busy summer.
We, my husband and me, bought a new land where there is a camp on it. Since we bought it we spent a lot of time to renovate it and it is perfect now. I say it is perfect to practice the « volontary simplicity » because we must pay attention to consume a bit of water and a bit of electricity. We must spare because we will be in lack of them.
This is why this summer I am very busy.
I think it’s enough for today but it will be a pleasure for me to inform you of the actions we will do in the future.
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A Busy Summer_
(We, ) my husband and I, bought some land/(or: a parcel of land) which has a camp on it. (After we bought it, )/After buying it, we spent a lot of time (to renovate it)/renovating it and it is perfect now. I should say it is perfect (to practice)/for practicing the « volontary simplicity » because we must use water and electricity sparingly due to limited availability.This is why I am very busy this summer.
I think this is enough writing for today, but it will be a pleasure for me to inform you of the actions we take in the future.
Good job !! Writing is an outstanding way to find your limits and then to improve !
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Busy summer.
We, My husband and I bought a new land where there is with a camp on it. Since we bought then it we spent a lot of time to renovate it and now it's perfect now. I say that it is perfect to practice the « voluntary simplicity » because which means we must to pay attention to consume just a bit of water and a bit of electricity . We must spare because we will be in lack of them in the future.This is why this summer I am very busy.
I think it’s enough for today but it will be a pleasure for me to inform you of the actions we will do in the future about our future actions.
I would write it down this way :) good luck with your camp!
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