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Kim Chang
CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have some advantages, and I can see why some of the students might choose Option B. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option A would be my preference. For one thing, a new computer center can help students who can not afford to buy a computer. The computer is more and more important for our study, but there are still some students have big financial pressure to buy a computer or afford the internet cost. It is good for those to do their homework or print out documents for free at school. For the other thing, I do not think a shopping area can survive in a small college too long. Even though building a shopping area may save students and teachers’ time to buy food or some materials, the college may not have enough customer to buy stuff. These stores may bankrupt within five years. As a result, I think the school should not invest money in a short-term plan. So as far as I concerned, Option A is the better choice.

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CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions

Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of the students might choose option B. However, there are several reasons why option A would be my preference.

First, a new computer center will help students who can not afford to buy a computer. Computers are growing more and more important for our study, but there are some students who are under financial pressure because they have to buy a computer and pay for internet. It would be highly beneficial for those students to be able to to do their homework or print out documents for free at school.

Also, I do not think a shopping area can survive in a small college for very long. Even though building a shopping area may save students' and teachers’ time, the college may not have enough customers to stay in business. These stores may bankrupt within five years. As a result, I think the school should not invest money into option B.

So as far as I concerned, Option A is the better choice.

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