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Kim Chang
CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have some advantages, and I can understand why some of the residents would choose Option B. On the whole, there are several reasons why Option A would be my preference. For one thing, it is fair to give each resident the same money. Even though taxpayers would get less money, it does not means that taxpayers do more effort in the city. Furthermore, this money can help the people who do not have the high salary to pay a higher tax. The money gives to the city, it means that every resident should have the same right to share the money. For the other thing, it is better to get the money immediately. People do not need to worry the money would be spent by other projects. Our government usually run out of the budget at the end of the year. It feels safer to give money to residents immediately. So as far as I am concerned, Option A is the better choice.

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CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions

Both options have some advantages, and I can understand why some of the residents would choose Option B. On the whole, there are several reasons why Option A would be my preference.

For one thing, it is fair to give each resident the same amount of money. Even though taxpayers would get less money, it does not mean that taxpayers would be having to do more for the city. Furthermore, this money can help the people who do not have a high salary to pay a higher tax. The money goes to the city, so every resident should have the same right to share the money.

For the other thing, it is better to get the money immediately. People do not need to worry the money would be spent by other projects. Our government usually runs out of the budget at the end of the year. It feels safer to give money to residents immediately.

So as far as I am concerned, Option A is the better choice.

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