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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello, my name is culrue.My major is International trade. I like this subject very much,beacuse it play a more and more important role in the world.I like English not beacuse it's a useful tool to communicate but an important skill in the international trade. I want make frends all over the world.and I also want to traval everywhere in th world.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Culrue.My majors is in International trade. I like this subject very much beacuse it plays an more and more important role in the world. I like English not only beacuse it's a useful tool to communicate but an important skill in the international trade.
I want to make friends from all over the world and I also want to travel everywhere in all around the world.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is culrue. (2spaces here) My major is in International trade. I like this subject very much,(1 space here) here beacuse it plays an more and more important role in the world. (2spaces here)I like English not only beacuse it's it is a useful tool to communicate with,  but also it is an important skill in the international trade.
I want make frends from all over the world,(1 space here) and I also want to traval everywhere in the world.

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tool to communicate but 'also' an important skill in the
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Culture, my major is International trade. I like this subject very much, because it play a more and more    an ever increasing, important role in the world.I like English not  just because  it's a useful tool to communicate wiith but  also an important skill in the international trade.
I want to make friends all over the world.and I also want to travel everywhere in the world.

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Hey Culture, some corrections below:

 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Culture.My major is International trade. I like this subject very much,beacuse it plays a more and more an ever increasingly important role in the world.I like English not (just) beacuse it's a useful tool to communicate but (also) because it's an important skill in the international trade.
I want to make friends all over the world.and I also want to travael everywhere in the world.

 

 

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