My Day 2018-07-15

Hi,

first of all, I would like to say that I hope you had a great day with your family.

Secondly, you did pretty well grammatically and your spelling is spot on. I've corrected what is actually wrong in your entry. As you can see, you did really well :). 

I have a few suggestions though. Once you've said "today" don't use it again unless there's a chance for confusion about when the other planned activities will happen. 

Instead of saying "We are going to go to the river. Our family likes swimming. Today the weather is fine.", try something like: We are going to the river because we like swimming and the weather is fine. Compound sentences are quite a bit more difficult so don't worry about it if you're not ready for it.

Last suggestion, again towards a compound sentence. Instead of "I hope we'll play games today with our children. Our family like likes reading books. I hope we can do it today.", try: I hope we'll (be able to) play games or read books with our children as well. 

Personally, I would use "I hope we'll be able to" but I'm fairly sure you don't have to.

Good luck learning.

John

My Day 2018-07-15

GREAT JOB! I hope you had a really fun ay with your family!

- when the noun in a plural, as in "family" then the verb should also be plural. you did it the first time with "our family likes swimming" so just remember to be consistent! 

- arrive to' is not a standard verb expression.
'To arrive in' or 'to arrive at' are the norm. For example:
'To arrive in London'
'To arrive at a meeting'