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黑鏡-Black Mirror 我開始看黑鏡。如果你不知道,黑鏡就是科幻選集電視。每集有不一樣的故事而且分析民眾怎麼用技術。大部分黑鏡很憤世嫉俗的但是有的時候讓觀眾樂觀一點或是至少讓觀眾自己決定如果集的技術好不好。 我最愛的集是San Junipero。我喜歡這集之所以是因為你可以跟別的人有很有趣的討論。我肯定推薦你看這集。話又說回來,我的問題題是你寧願永遠住在你不能去世的虛擬實境或是你很老時自然去世? I started watching Black Mirror. If you don’t know, Black Mirror is a sci-fi anthology series. Every episode has a different story and analyzes how people use technology. For the most part the show is very cynical but sometimes it gives the audience a little hope or, at least, let’s them decide for themselves if the technology in the episode is good or not. My favorite episode is San Junipero. The reason why I like this episode is because you can have a good conversation with other people. I definitely recommend you watch it. That said, my question is would you rather live forever in a virtual reality where you cannot die or naturally pass away when you get old?

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黑鏡-Black Mirror

我開始看黑鏡。如果你不知道,黑鏡就是科幻選集電視。每集有不一樣的故事而且分析民眾怎麼用技術。大部分黑鏡很憤世嫉俗的但是有的時候讓觀眾樂觀一點或是至少讓觀眾自己決定如果集的技術好不好。
*《黑镜》,题材,剧情,?。
我最愛的集是San Junipero。我喜歡這集之所以是因為你可以跟別的人有很有趣的討論。我肯定推薦你看這集。話又說回來,我的問題題是你寧願永遠住在你不能去世的虛擬實境或是你很老時自然去世?
*一集,是因为,use verbs than nouns,还是。
I started watching Black Mirror. If you don’t know, Black Mirror is a sci-fi anthology series. Every episode has a different story and analyzes how people use technology. For the most part the show is very cynical but sometimes it gives the audience a little hope or, at least, let’s them decide for themselves if the technology in the episode is good or not.



My favorite episode is San Junipero. The reason why I like this episode is because you can have a good conversation with other people. I definitely recommend you watch it. That said, my question is would you rather live forever in a virtual reality where you cannot die or naturally pass away when you get old?



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你好,Josh, 已经有好几个人帮你修改你的作文了,那我就不再修改了。我很喜欢黑镜,所以想跟你谈谈黑镜。

不久前我也刚看完黑镜,很棒的电视剧。我也喜欢San Junipero那集,但是如果是我的话,我很可能会选择自然的老去,不想在虚幻的地方日复一日单调的生活,哪怕那里的我永远年轻。不过人老去的时候也许总会有些遗憾,有些未完成的事,来不及尝试的事,如果有第二次机会,可以弥补,也未尝不可。

黑镜给我留下最深刻印象的是S01E01 National Anthem、 S03E06 Hated in the Nation、S04E06 Black Museum,不知道你有没有看完,我就先不剧透了。

黑镜让我震撼和恐惧的是,它看似是在表现未来,却让我觉得一切都是当下,正在发生。

另外,想推荐给你另一部非常好看的英剧:九号秘事(Inside No.9),跟黑镜相比一点也不逊色。去看吧,你不会失望的。看完之后我们可以讨论一下那些印象深刻的剧集。

PS:有什么其他好看的美剧/英剧可以推荐给我吗?谢谢啦。: )
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黑鏡-Black Mirror

我開始看黑鏡。如果你不知道,黑鏡就是科幻選集電視。每集有不一樣的故事而且分析民眾怎麼用技術。大部分黑鏡很憤世嫉俗的,但是有的時候讓觀眾樂觀一點或是至少讓觀眾自己決定如果这一集的技術好不好。

我最愛的那一集是San Junipero。我之所以喜歡這集之所以,是因為你可以跟別人有展开很有趣的討論。我肯定强烈推薦你看這集。話又說回來,我的問題題是你寧願选择永遠住在你不能去世的虛擬實境,还或是你很老時自然去世到时自然老去?


over all, very well written, I only change a few small mistakes and hope this helps. I have tried not to eliminate your writing style.


I started watching Black Mirror. If you don’t know, Black Mirror is a sci-fi anthology series. Every episode has a different story and analyzes how people use technology. For the most part the show is very cynical but sometimes it gives the audience a little hope or, at least, let’s them decide for themselves if the technology in the episode is good or not.

My favorite episode is San Junipero. The reason why I like this episode is because you can have a good conversation with other people. I definitely recommend you watch it. That said, my question is would you rather live forever in a virtual reality where you cannot die or naturally pass away when you get old?


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黑鏡-Black Mirror

我(最近)開始收看黑鏡。如果你不知道,黑鏡就是一部科幻影集選集電視。每集都有不一樣的故事而並且分析民眾怎麼使用科技(技術)。大部分黑鏡大部分的內容很憤世嫉俗的,但是有的時候這也帶給讓觀眾樂觀一點希望,或是至少能讓使觀眾自己思考決定如果本集的介紹的(技術)科技的好與不好(壞)。

我最愛的一集是San Junipero。我之所以喜歡這集之所以是因為你可以跟別的人有進行很有趣的討論。我肯定非常推薦你看這集。話又說回來,我的問題題是:你會選擇寧願永遠住在你不能去世的虛擬實境或是在你很老時自然去世?

I started watching Black Mirror. If you don’t know, Black Mirror is a sci-fi anthology series. Every episode has a different story and analyzes how people use technology. For the most part the show is very cynical but sometimes it gives the audience a little hope or, at least, let’s them decide for themselves if the technology in the episode is good or not.



My favorite episode is San Junipero. The reason why I like this episode is because you can have a good conversation with other people. I definitely recommend you watch it. That said, my question is would you rather live forever in a virtual reality where you cannot die or naturally pass away when you get old?
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黑鏡-Black Mirror

我開始看黑鏡(maybe you can put some tense words to make it more natural like ”最近“)。如果你不知道(We use 沒聽過 more than 不知道 in this case),黑鏡就是科幻選集電視->科幻主題的連續劇。每集有不一樣的故事,而且分析民眾怎麼用技術(techniche->技術 technology->科技)。大部分黑鏡很憤世嫉俗的但是有的時候讓觀眾樂觀一點或是至少讓觀眾自己決定如果集的技術好不好。

(黑鏡裡面大部分相當有批判性,但有時候又會給觀眾一些希望,或至少讓觀眾決定在劇中的科技是好或壞。)


我最愛的集是San Junipero。我喜歡這集之所以是因為你可以跟別的人有->進行很有趣的討論。我肯定->很推薦你看這集。話又說回來,我的問題題是:你是寧願永遠住在你不能去世的虛擬實境,或是你會選擇自然老死很老時自然去世?


I started watching Black Mirror. If you don’t know, Black Mirror is a sci-fi anthology series. Every episode has a different story and analyzes how people use technology. For the most part the show is very cynical but sometimes it gives the audience a little hope or, at least, let’s them decide for themselves if the technology in the episode is good or not.



My favorite episode is San Junipero. The reason why I like this episode is because you can have a good conversation with other people. I definitely recommend you watch it. That said, my question is would you rather live forever in a virtual reality where you cannot die or naturally pass away when you get old?

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