Calls in my job
Hi,
My name is Aline, I'm a finance analyst, my job is do internal controls (sox) and costumer's credit analysis.
Regarding the activities I don't any problem, but I need so much speak english for improve this activities. The company where I have been worked is American, I'm make reports for them, but all by mail and still have I search so much before sends for words or grammatical. Would be incredible if I feel more secure and speak on the phone for resolve problems.
Because this I hope that you can help me, your correction and feedback will be very very important for me.
Thank you,
Aline.
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Calls in my job
Hi,My name is Aline, I'm a finance analyst. My job is doing internal controls (sox) and costumer's credit analysis.
Regarding the activities I don't have any problems, but I need so much to speak English for in order to improve these activities. The company where I have been working is American and I make reports for them, but all by mail and still I have to search so much before sending them because of my limited vocabulary and grammar. It would be incredible if I feel more secure and speak on the phone to resolve problems.
Because of this I hope that you can help me, your correction and feedback will be very very important for me.
Thank you,
Aline.
It seems to me that your reports are probably routine statements that could be standardized. That way you might be able to limit the amount of errors by using such statements.
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Calls in at my job (<--I think this is what you mean. Please tell me if I'm wrong.)
My name is Aline. I'm a finance analyst, and my job is do handle (<--"Do" is a vague verb and should be avoided. Try using a more specific verb.) internal controls (sox) and costumer's credit analysis.
Regarding the activities I don't any problem with these tasks, but I need so much to speak English more fluently for to improve this activities my performance. The company where I have been working is American. I'm make reports for them, but it's all by mail, and I still have I search to look up so much before sending them for words or grammatical because of my limited vocabulary and grammar knowledge. It would be incredible if I could feel more secure and speak on over the phone for to resolve problems.
Because of this, I hope that you can help me. Your corrections and feedback will be very, very important for me.
Thank you,
Aline
Hi, Aline! Welcome to Italki. I hope you'll find this site useful. I'm happy to help you with your English, so please feel free to ask me if you have any questions =)
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Nossa! Que legal! Já pegou aqueles "graded books"? São uns livrinhos classificados por níveis (A1, A2, B1, B2, C1,C2). Cara, me ajudou muuuuito mesmo, principalmente para escrever. Para mim foi a forma mais rápida e sem muito estresse para aprender a escrever um pouco melhor.
Acredito que não tenha problema se os teus primeiros textos fiquem simples contanto que fiquem bem consistentes e legíveis.
Boa sorte!
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