My hobby 1
One of my hobby is trip.
Today I went to Tokyo.I enjoyed Ginza,Omotesando,Asakusa etc.Among all those place,Asakusa was very exciting place.because it looks like a festibal.A big paper lantern was forceful.
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My hobby 1
One of my hobbies is travelling.
Today I went to Tokyo. I enjoyed Ginza, Omotesando, and Asakusa. Among Of all those places, Asakusa was the most exciting place, because it looked like a festival. There was a big paper lantern. I was impressive for the its size.
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1. You could say among all, but of all is more informal and probably used more often
2. Place is crossed out the second time because you have already said it - Of all those places, Asakusa was the most exciting. Putting the extra place after exciting is redundant.
3. Asakusa was the most exciting, because it looked like a festival. Since you are writing in past tense, all of your verbs must be in past tense too.
4. The last sentence could be either "It was impressive for its size" or "I was impressed by its size," depending on what you want to express.
Hope that helps :)
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Thank you for correction,Runiat and Sarah.
How about the previous sentence?
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My hobby 1
One of my hobbies is travelling.Today I went to Tokyo.I enjoyed Ginza,Omotesando,and Asakusa .Among all those places,Asakusa was the most exciting place.because it looks like a festival.There was a big paper lantern.I was impressive for the size.
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My hobby 1
One of my hobbToday I went to Tokyo.I enjoyed Ginza, Omotesando, and Asakusa
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My hobby 1
One of my hobbies isToday I went to Tokyo. I enjoyed Ginza, Omotesando, Asakusa etc. Among all those places, Asakusa
Hobbies: assuming you got more than one, you'll want the plural form.
Trip: could be "going on trips", or maybe "travelling".
Places: again, plural -s on the end.
Was very exciting place: "was the most exciting place" or "was a very exciting place".
Festibal: correct spelling is "festival", I believe.
Forceful: not entirely sure what, if anything, is wrong about the last sentence, but something seems off. What did you mean to say?
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