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Wthat I think about cartoon "Song of the Sea" Today i saw cartoon "Song of the Sea". I think it is great cartoon because this prety story about brother and sister with element Scottish folklore. Main hero is Ben, Ben lives with he sister and father, his mother leaved in the sea when born his sister because his mother is the Selkie Selki this is half woman and seal. Ben hate his sister, because he think what sister is reason mother for leaving his . But in the midle of the story Ben help his sister and start love her. Cartoon "Song of the Sea" tells about that people can not be may are good or bad, all people is same good and they want help for their family, but we can not make a choice for other people. This is short story about the cartoon, because I just starting write in my notebook. I'm sure my storyes after will be better. Thank you!

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What I think about the cartoon "Song of the Sea"

Today I saw the cartoon "Song of the Sea".
I think it is a great cartoon because this prety  it is a pretty story about brother and sister with an element of Scottish folklore.
The main hero is Ben. Ben lives with  he  his sister and father. His mother leaved lived in the sea when his sister was born his sister because his mother is the Selkie 

A Selki this is half woman and half seal. Ben hates his sister, because he thinks what his sister is the reason his mother left  for leaving his . But in the middle of the story Ben helps his sister and starts to love her.
The cartoon "Song of the Sea" tells about us that people can are not be may are only good or bad. All people is are as same good as each other and they want to help their family, but we can not make a choices for other people.

This is short story about the cartoon, because I just starting started to write in my notebook. I'm sure my stories after will be better.
Thank you!

Watch out for those articles (the, a/an) before nouns, particularly singular nouns. Do not forget to put an 's' at the end of a verb for the third person. For example:

I think too much.

You think too much.

He/she/it thinks too much.

We think too much.

You (all) think too much.

They think too much.

Well done on your first notebook entry. It is good practice for learning to write well. Keep going =)


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