Could you help me to check my short writing? I would like to submit this as a part of my resume. They ask me one short English writing for any subject. So I want to explain my special bicycle trip I had about 10 years ago. I need your helps guys :). please advise me to get it be better. Thanks, ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- When I was a freshman, I planed a bicycle trip to Japan with 2 of my friends. At first we planed to start from Fukuoka to Osaka. It's quite long distance by bicycle. The main goal was to survive in stranger place without help from our parents while making special memories with friends. It was a kind of challenge of 20 and first bag-packing in my life. We had a part time job in weekends and had meetings for detail plans. Also trained myself for long distance bicycle trip. Finally we faced the summer vacation and were on board the ship to Fukuoka with our bag packs. We paddled on our bicycle for about 100km per day and cooked with pot ourselves, slept in our tents. I think we were really young and stupid but I can have unforgettable memories with my friends and check my passion through this trip while making a goal helping each others. Also I can say this memories helps me someday when I faced hard time. Because I know I can do and I have team to do something with.