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Small talk Hello people!

How are you? A hope that very good.

Today I did a lot of things...

I left my two daughters on school and go to a meeting with my customer.

There were many people in this meeting, It was very lond and tiring.

There was a american man there, I try to talk with him, It was very cool, but the english is yeat a litle not understandable to me.

However I see a improvement from my English.

Next week I'll be in Orlando USA and I want to talk with a lot of americans in my trip. This will improve my enghish and finish with my talk afraid.

I got a lot of tickets to visit parks at Disney World and Universal, a hope this trip will be amazing and unforgetable to me and my family!!

Please correct my mystakes and have all a great day!!

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Small talk

Hello people!

How are you? I hope that very good.

Today I did a lot of things...

I left my two daughters on school and went to a meeting with my customer.

There were many people at this meeting, It was very long and tiring.

There was an American man there, I tried to talk with him, it was very cool, but English yet is a little not understandable to me. (This last sentence, doesn't express well what you're trying to say, though it is correct, try to simplify it)

However I see an improvement of my English.

Next week, I'll be in Orlando, USA, and I want to talk with a lot of Americans in my trip. This will improve my English and end with my shyness of speaking. 

I got a lot of tickets to visit the parks at Disney World and Universal. I hope this trip will be amazing and unforgettable to me and my family!!

Please correct my mystakes and have all a great day!!

(In general, congratulations on your English, no big problems at all, just tiny problems that can be easily solved.

1. Once you start a sentence in basic past form, Simple Past (left, ate, drank, spoke, did, went, cooked, made) don't forget to continue the following verbs in past tense as well, unless you're using a mixed condition or any other meaning that could refer to a different tense. Ex.: I ate too much last night, and because of that, I had a terrible stomachache.

2. Check your articles understanding (the, a, an), and prepositions (for, on, in, at, to, from, to)

3. Some (not to worry about) spelling mistakes. 

4. Sometimes, It is good if we simplify our sentences in a way to be easily understood. 

But in general, GOOD WORK!

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Small talk

Hello people!

How are you? I hope that you're very good.

Today I did a lot of things...

I left my two daughters at school and went to a meeting with my customer.

There were many people at this meeting, It was very long and tiring.

There was an American man there, I tried to talk to him. It was very cool, but I still don't understand English very well.

However, I see an improvement in my English.

Next week I'll be in Orlando, USA and I want to talk to a lot of Americans on my trip. This will improve my English and eliminate my fear of speaking.

I got a lot of tickets to visit parks at Disney World and Universal. I hope this trip will be amazing and unforgettable for me and my family!!

Please correct my mistakes and have a great day!!

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Small talk

Hello people!

How are you? I hope that very good.

Today I did a lot of things...

I left my two daughters at school and I went to a meeting with my customer.

There were many people in this meeting, It was very long and tiring.

There was a american man there, I tried to talk with him, It was very cool, but the english is yet  little ( it sounds better just putting "still a bit" not understandable to me.

However I see an improvement with my English.

Next week I'll be in Orlando USA and I want to talk with a lot of americans in my trip. This will improve my english and finish with my talk afraid (fear of talking/speaking).

I got a lot of tickets to visit parks at Disney World and Universal, I hope this trip will be amazing and unforgetable for me and my family!!

Please correct my mystakes and have all a great day!!


Comments: Nice story, just some minor mistakes. Enjoy your vacations! Orlando and Disney Parks are very good, I recommend going to Island of Adventure. 

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