the positive and the negative sides of globalization When the humanity want to mean the word globalization, first need to know your history. In my opinion the globalization began in United kingdom wit

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the positive and the negative sides of globalization When the humanity want to mean the word globalization, first need to know your history. In my opinion the globalization began in United kingdom with the industrial revolution. After that the world change totally, and it started to develop a lot of kinds of machines. As a result the countries started to have an economic system in rooted to industry, after that the world have been started to interchange their products with each other’s. This is globalization, but what are the positive and negative points about. The globalization will allow that a country increase her opportunities in terms of education, opportunities, economic, infrastructures and more. Also, the countries that can be this, increasing their political power in relation with others. In summary this kind of countries offer a good quality of life such as Korea, USA and Germany. Another advantage about is that a lot of people nowadays can traveled abroad, and we have more opportunities about develop and do new ideas of business. But, the globalization too have a huge problem about, It has been grown up the different into poor countries and rich countries. As soon this started the social and economic differences have been kept up. Nowadays, The poor countries like India or Thailand have a worse quality life for their population. Also, They don’t have opportunities about change it, If they don’t have a good social economic level. Moreover, The environmental is being damaged due to globalization system, and some results about are less trees, animals, clean air, water and more. This economic system has such good with bad points, but in my opinion the best way for solve them is to perform a middle point, and play a game with good conditions for all humanity. For another way, the differences are necessaries but is important have a good balance with them.

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the positive and the negative sides of globalization

When humanity wants to mention(?) world globalization, first it needs to know its history.

In my opinion, globalization began in the United Kingdom with the industrial revolution. After that, the world changed totally, and it started to develop a lot of different kinds of machines. As a result, the countries started to have an economic system rooted in industry, after that the world begins to trade with each other. This is globalization, but what are the positive and negative points to come out of it?.

Globalization will allow a country to increase its opportunities in terms of education, opportunities, economic, infrastructures and more. Also, the countries that can increase their political power in relation to others. Offer a good quality of life such as Korea, USA and Germany. Another advantage of it is that a lot of people nowadays can travel abroad, and we have more opportunities to create, new business and to develop ideas.

But, globalization too has a huge problem It has shown up the difference between poor and rich countries. As soon as this started the social and economic differences have been continuing. Nowadays, The poor countries like India or Thailand have a worse quality life for their population. Also, They don’t have any opportunities to change it If they don’t have a good social and economical lifestyle. Moreover, The environment is being damaged due to the globalization (system), and the results are fewer trees, animals, clean air, water and more.

This economic system has good and bad points, but in my opinion, the best way to solve them is to find a middle point and play a (fair) game with equal conditions for all humanity.

good arguments but wrong choice of words in many sentences, and too much about it was used.

you do not say THE globalisation, you can say the globalisation of (whatever)

I left in "play a game" I think you might have wanted to say "find a level playing field"

For another way, the differences are necessities but it's important to have a good balance with them.

this is duplication it should be removed or rephrased to include another comparative argument.

the differences that (another argument) are necessities but it is important to have a good balance.

now you should put your summary at the end

In summary this kind of -->( - - --- )

This economic system has such good with bad points, but in my opinion the best way for solve them is to perform a middle point, and play a game with good conditions for all humanity. For another way, the differences are necessaries (necessary) but it is important have a good balance with them.

Great job! Watch out for your use of definite articles! With abstract nouns like globalization you don't need the definite article in English.

the positive and the negative sides of globalization

When the humanity want to mean the word globalization, first need to know your history.(unclear meaning here) Perhaps you mean something like: Before we can know what is meant by the word globalization, we must first know its In my opinion the globalization began in United kingdom with the industrial revolution. After that the world change (=changed) totally, and it started to develop a lot (many) of kinds of machines. As a result the (article here not needed) countries started to have an economic system in (not needed) rooted to industry, after that the world have been started (the word started/ or began) to interchange their products with each other’s (with each other). This is globalization, but what are the positive and negative points about.

The globalization (= globalization) will allow that a country to increase her opportunities in terms of education, opportunities, economic, infrastructures and more. Also, the countries that can be this (do this), increasing (increase) their political power in relation with (to)others. In summary this (these) kind of countries offer a good quality of life such as Korea, USA and Germany. Another advantage about is (this is) that a lot of people nowadays can traveled (travel) abroad, and we have more opportunities about develop and do new ideas of business.(to develop and bring forth new ideas in business).

But, the globalization (globalization) too have (has) a huge problem about, It has been grown up the different (developed differently) into poor countries and rich countries. As soon this started the social and economic differences have been kept up (persisted). Nowadays, The poor countries (poor countries) like India or Thailand have a worse quality life for their population. Also, They don’t have opportunities about (to) change it, If they don’t have a good social economic level. Moreover, The environmental (the environment) is being damaged due to globalization system, and some results about are less trees, animals, clean air, water and more. (and some results are there being less trees, animals, clean air, water, ect.)

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