第一个汉语课
今天我有了我第一个真的汉语可在italki。我学习汉语六年，可是我还没用我的汉语跟一个真的中国人谈谈，好啊好啊我跟夜场的卖串儿人说话可是那不是很长时间。我找到italki因为我想复习英语还有汉语。说英语没有那么大的问题，可是说汉语我特别怕。这样我跟Billy第一个课是英语课可是我们说汉语一点儿。今天我们有一个真的汉语课。我坐着在我的公司不远的公园。在那儿很安静，没有很多的人，我可以聊天儿。我们聊各种各样的东西比如说国家不同的喝咖啡、茶的习惯。出租车和Uber的关系。各种各样的节日。Billy告诉我十多的生词。我们只用百分之五英语。下课的时候我想说一个英语句可是我不可以想英语！我要用很多汉语词因为我的大脑、我的想法变成汉语啊！太奇怪，太好啊！下课后我特别累可是特别高兴因为我跟一个真的中国人聊天儿。
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第一个节汉语课
今天在italki我有了上了我的第一个节真的汉语可课在italki。我已经学习汉语六年了，可是我还没用我的汉语跟一个真的中国人谈谈，===》可是我还没有用汉语跟一个真正的中国人聊过天。
好啊好啊我跟夜场的卖串儿人说话可是那不是很长时间。===》我有跟夜市卖烤串儿的人说过话，但彼此间对话都很短。（Comment: I don't understand what you were trying to say by 好啊好啊 here.）
我找到italki因为我想复习英语还有汉语。我说英语没有那么大的问题，可是说汉语我特别怕。这样所以，我跟Billy第一个节课是英语课，可是我们会说一点儿汉语一点儿。今天我们有一个节真正的汉语课。
我们坐着在离我的公司不远的公园。（Comment: I believe what you meant was both of you not only you alone.）
在那儿很安静，没有很多的人，我们可以聊天儿。（Comment: same reason, it should be both of you not only one person.）
我们聊了各种各样的东西比如说各个国家不同的喝咖啡、或者喝茶的习惯。，出租车和Uber的关系。以及各种各样的节日。（Comment: It is ok to use "东西" to represent the meaning of topic, but it is better to use 话题 here.）
Billy告诉教了我十多个的汉语生词。在对话时，我们基本上用汉语，大约只用百分之五的英语进行沟通。下课的时候，我想说一个英语句英语，可是我不可以想英语！
我要用很多汉语词因为我的大脑、我的想法变成汉语啊！太奇怪，太好啊！===》我想用汉语的思维进行汉语对话。这个想法蛮奇怪的，但是我觉得很好。（Comment: I don't quite get what you were trying to say. It's my understanding of your original Chinese sentence. ）
下课后我特别累，可是特别高兴，因为我今天跟一个真正的中国人聊天儿了。
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Thanks for the great translations! You are very helpful! I think I got only this 儿 as a bad/Beijing habit. My teacher didn't tought us any other slang expressions, since she isn't Beijinger just worked there for several years. I agree with you that it's better to speak common language because it's the safer and more polite with others. That's why I try to listen and learn from as many sources as I can, so not to learn just one dialect but a more standard Chinese.
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I wanted to say an English sentence but I wasn't able to think in English. I had to use many Chinese words because my brain, my way of thinking changed to Chinese.====>我想说句英文，但是我已经失去英语逻辑思维能力了。我只能用很多中文词语表达，因为我的思维方式已经转变成为中文式的了。
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And about “ok...ok...”, you can use 好吧 to represent the linking words. Just so you know that it's very casual and very spoken Mandarin and kinda internet-ish. If you are writing something serious, it should be avoided.
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"I haven't spoken with a real Chinese person in my life. But.. O.K...O.K. I was taking with the Chuaner seller but that wasn't that long." ====>迄今为止，我还没有跟一个真正的中国人聊过天。但是……好吧，我跟卖烤串儿的小贩聊过，但是那对话很短。
I didn't translate "in my life" into the exact Chinese, because that might sound weird in Chinese.(我在我的生命中还没有跟一个真正的中国人聊过天)===》I think it sounds kinda weird. I don't know how to explain, just a feeling. Probably because most Chinese take the words like 爱 or 生命 very seriously. Most of us might not say those words easily. For example, 他是我生命中最重要的人。When we say this, we mean this. So in this case, I know what you mean, but I think 迄今为止（so far /up to now）has the same meaning and sounds more natural.
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