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Let's write in English! I have traveled to Korea three times so far in my life. Because Korea is so closed to Japan, it is almost like taking a domestic trip. The first trip to Korea was a trip with my girlfriends after high school graduation. If I remember correctly, we went to Soul and stayed at Lotte Hotel. I think we went to Lotte world, an small scale amusement park. We went shopping at Nandaimon for cheap jewelries.

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Let's write in English!

I have traveled to Korea three times so far. Because Korea is so close to Japan, it is almost like taking a domestic trip. The first trip to Korea was with my girlfriends after high school graduation. If I remember correctly, we went to Soul and stayed at Lotte Hotel. I think we went to Lotte world, an small scale amusement park. We went shopping at Nandaimon for cheap jewelry.

very well written!

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Let's write in English!

I have traveled to Korea three times so far. in my life. Because Korea is so closed to Japan, it is was almost like taking a domestic trip. The first trip I had  to Korea  that was a trip with my girlfriends and it was  after high school graduation. If as far i can remember  I can remember correctly, we went to Soul and stayed at Lotte Hotel. I think we went to Lotte world, an small scale amusement park. We went shopping at Nandaimon for buying  cheap  low price jewelries.
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You are so right!! "Seoul" Thank you very much!! I am learning so much from posting on "notebook" :D
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Hi Mariko! You're notebook entry is written very well, and I can see that some people in the comment section already made some suggestions as to what you could change, but there is one thing I'd like to mention: I'm not sure if there's a city in Korea called Soul, but if you meant to say that you went to the South Korean capital city, then you should write "Seoul". 韓国の首都ソウルは英語で「Seoul」です。

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