Something About Billiards

We can always could learn something from your life even if you are when playing games.  I think we should calm down no matter the monent your if you are winning or lose, losing.  that important.  Dark side will control you when your are crazy!then ,you always will be a loser at least. If not, you will lose control and eventually get so crazy that you loses all the time.

You need to change your title to something like, "Playing Games" or "Keeping Cool".  This is because in your essay, you did not even mention billards or anything directly related to it.  You must have been watching "Star Wars"!  We don't normally use the "dark side" in such kind of essay writing, unless you are talking about human nature etc.

You are absolutely right in keeping cool.  It is not whether you are winning or losing.  It's how you play the game - sportsmanship.

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