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World Cup This month will start the fabulous world cup!! I am brazilian and since last wolrd cup here in brazil when brazil lost germany 7x1, our team becomes not reliable. I remenber when I was younger, one month before the world cup begin, we used to paint the walls with our flag, wear clothes with braziliam flag colors and nowadays is very dificult find a painted street. But, why people don't do it anymore? I will explain with one word - CORRUTION . Our country is drowned in corruption, you can see It en all places, government, sport, schools, etc. It is unbelievable, but is true.

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World Cup

This month will start the fabulous wWorld cCup will start!! I am bBrazilian and since the last wolrd World cCup here in bBrazil when bBrazil lost to gGermany 7x-1, our team has becomes not unreliable. I remenber remember when I was younger, one month before the world cup begin began, we used to paint the walls with our flag, wear clothes with braziliam  the Brazilian flag colors and but nowadays it is very dificult difficult to find a painted decorated street. But, why don't people don't do it anymore? I will explain with one word - CORRUTION CORRUPTION. Our country is drowneding in corruption, you can see It en in all places, government, sport, schools, etc. It is unbelievable, but is true.

Hi Cirlei - good work. Don't forget that in English we used capital letters at the start of proper nouns like names of places, languages, etc.

I'm looking forward to the World Cup, but in Australia we only hope that our country can reach the second round!

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World Cup

This month will start the fabulous world cup!! I am brazilian and since last world cup here in brazil when brazil lost germany 7x1, our team becomes not reliable. I remenber when I was younger, one month before the world cup began, we used to paint the walls with our flag, wear clothes with braziliam flag colors and nowadays is very dificult find a painted street. But, why people don't do it anymore? I will explain with one word - CORRUPTION . Our country is drowned in corruption, you can see It In all places, government, sport, schools, etc. It is unbelievable, but is true.
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 I am Brazilian and since last world cup here in Brazil when Brazil lost to  Germany 7 - 1, our team has become unreliable. I remember when I was younger, one month before the World Cup began, we used to paint the walls with our flag, wear clothes with Brazilian flag colors and nowadays it is very difficult to find a painted street. But, why don't people don't do it anymore? I will explain with one word - CORRUPTION . Our country is drowning in corruption, you can see it in all places, government, sport, schools, etc. It is unbelievable, but it is true.

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