Tuesday June 5th 2018
Today,I've been to the hospital and took an orientation for my teen volunteer activity.
There was about 25 kids applied for volunteers,seems most of them are middle school student.Our coordinator,Mrs.Beal,she's a very nice old lady.She gave us a self introduce,then she started to tell us the rules that we're supposed to know and follow.For each department they had different rules.She talked a little fast,so in some points I didn't understand very well.By the time,I started to feel nervous and without confidence.After we did a TB skin test,she assigned us,basically just let us to choose the department and the days for working.What I really wanted to work at is the surgery room,but I was worried about my English problem,and Mrs.Beal did too.So she suggested me to work at the front desk and I consented her.After that I was a kind of frustrated.Some people order pizza for us,so then we had lunch.Mrs.Beal said we start working on tomorrow and she's glad to see our smiling faces and work with us.
Now I'm looking forward to my volunteer job.Front desk probably is also a good choice for me.I'll do my best!
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
0
Tuesday June 5th 2018
Today,I went to the hospital and had an orientation for my teen volunteer activity.About 25 kids applied for volunteer positions,(or: to be a voluntter). It seems that most of them are middle school students. Our coordinator,Mrs.Beal is a very nice old lady.She introducted herself, then she started to tell us the rules that we're supposed to know and follow.For each department has different rules. She talked a little fast,so I didn't understand some points very well. By that time,I started to feel nervous and unsure of myself.After we did a TB skin test, she gave us our assignments.basically she just let us to choose the department and the days we wanted to work.What I really wanted was to workin the surgery department (in an operating room),but I was worried about my English problem,and Mrs.Beal was too.So she suggested that I work at the front desk and I agreed. After that, I was a kind of frustrated.Some people ordered pizza for us, and we had lunch.Mrs.Beal said we would start working on tomorrow and thatshe was glad to see our smiling faces and to work with us.
Now I'm looking forward to my volunteer job. The front desk is probably also a good choice for me. I'll do my best!
0
Tuesday June 5th 2018
Today,I've been to the hospital and took an orientation for my teen volunteer activity.Today, I went to the hospital and did the orientation for my teen volunteer activity. [Remember to put a space after commas and periods.]
There was about 25 kids applied for volunteers,seems most of them are middle school student.
There were about 25 kids applying to be volunteers. It seemed that most of them were middle school students.
Our coordinator, Mrs.Beal, is a very nice old lady. She had us a introduce ourselves, then she started to tell us the rules that we're supposed to know and follow. For each department they had different rules. She talked a little fast, so in some points I didn't understand some points very well. By the time, After a while, I started to feel nervous and without confidence. After we did a TB skin test, she assigned us,basically just let us to choose the department and the days for we would be working. What I really wanted to do was work at is in the surgery department room,* but I was worried about my English problem, and Mrs.Beal was did too.So she suggested me to that I work at the front desk and I agreed. consented her.After that I was a kind of frustrated. Some people ordered pizza for us, so then we had lunch. Mrs.Beal said we would start working on tomorrow and she's glad to see our smiling faces and work with us.
Now I'm looking forward to my volunteer job. Front desk probably is also a good choice for me. I'll do my best!
* I don't think they will let you work in the operating room, so I changed room to department.
Luna, I know you will do fine. Please write more about your summer. Remember HIPAA, so if you write about patients don't use real names.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
