Day6: Stray Kittens (0529)
I picked up three stray kittens a couple of months. There was a rainy day and the weather was very cold. I found them at the corner on the street in the morning. They were all wet and looked so pitiful in the rain. In the afternoon, the mother cat still didn't appearance. So I decided took them to my home. I brought them to the pet hospital. The pet doctor cleaned them and had a preventive needle to them.(unfortunately, the black cat is so small and always got diarrhea. The doctor didn't cure its) Nowadays, I help them to found new home. New masters are all very kind guys, They love animals. I think they will happy.
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Day6: Stray Kittens (0529)
I picked up three stray kittens a couple of month ago. It There was a rainy day and the weather was very cold. I found them at the corner on the street in the morning. They were all wet and looked so pitiful in the rain. In the afternoon, the mother cat still didn't re-appeared. So I decided took them to my home. I brought them to the pet hospital. The pet doctor vet cleaned them and had a preventive needle to immunised them.(unfortunately, the black cat is so small and always got diarrhea. The doctor didn't cure its) Nowadays, I help them to found new home. New masters are all very kind guys, They love animals. I think they will be happy.Thanks for reading :-D
Preventive needle seems correct, but I never heard about it in spoken english. I think it come from your chinese.
打针 - to immunize (in usa or immunise in british english), vaccination, or receive an injection or vaccine or a shot of vaccin.
Which lead me to a question, is it correct in chinese ?
我收到了打针了。I received an injection of vaccine.
我被打针了. I got shot ? like by a gun ?
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Day6: Stray Kittens (0529)
I picked up three stray kittens a couple of months ago. There It was a rainy day and the weather was very cold. I found them at the corner on of the street in the morning. They were all wet and looked so pitiful in the rain. In the afternoon, the mother cat still hadn't appeared didn't appearance. So I decided took to take them to my home. I brought them to the pet hospital. The pet doctor vet cleaned them and had a preventive needle to them.(unfortunately, the black cat is so small and always got has/gets diarrhea. The vet doctor couldn't cure it didn't cure its) Nowadays, Afterwards/recently I help them to found helped find them a new home. New masters The new owners are all very kind guys, They love animals. I think they will happy.Thanks for reading :-D
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Day6: Stray Kittens (0529)
I picked up three stray kittens a couple of months ago. There It was a rainy day and the weather was very cold. I found them at the corner on of the street in the morning. They were all wet and looked so pitiful in the rain. In the afternoon, the mother cat still didn't had not appeared, so I decided to took take them to my home. I brought them to the pet hospital and the pet doctor cleaned them and had a preventive needle to inject them with. (Unfortunately, the black cat is so small and always got has diarrhea and the doctor didn't couldn't cure it) Nowadays, I try to help them to found find a new home. New masters owners that are all very kind guys people that They love animals. I think they will be happy.Thanks for reading :-D
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Thank you! They have gone to the new home. I'll keep up my English writing, it's interesting. Thanks you to revise my text :-D
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Poor darlings. They are so cute! I am glad that you took them in and have been taking care of them! Hope you will find good owners. :)
Keep up the good work with your English writing, it's important to keep practicing this skill and you will improve. :)
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