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Travel I'm happy because in two days I'm going to travel to Mexico with my sister and nefew. It will be a concert there. So I'm excited for that. I would like to share with the bands and have a great time with them.

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I'm happy because in two days I'm going to travel to Mexico with my sister and nephew.

There will be a concert there. So I'm excited about that. I would like to share some time with the bands and have a great time with them.

Ph = f sound in many English words.

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I'm happy because, in two days time, I'm going to a concert in Mexico with my sister and nephew. I'm so excited. I would like to meet the bands and have a great time with them.
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Travel

[I'm/I am] happy because, in two days, [I'm/I am] going [to travel] to Mexico with my sister and nephew.

It will [There'll/There will] be a concert there, so I'm excited for that. [I'd/I would] like to      ?     the bands and have a great time with [them/the band/my relatives/my family/my sister and nephew].

[I'd like to share the bands with my family and have a great time.]?

(Try to be consistent with contractions like "I'm" and "I'd". Avoid starting a sentence with "so". These two things are common among native speakers, so don't be discouraged. You write really well!)

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I'm happy because in two days I'm going to travel to Mexico with my sister and nephew.

Their will be a concert there. So I'm excited for that. I would like to share with the bands and have a great time with them.
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o, se puede decir así también:


I'm happy for I'm going to travel to Mexico with my sister and nephew within two days.

because = for = since
porque = ya que

It will be a concert there. So I'm excited about that. I would like to share and have a great time with the bands there.

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