Go to the zoo
Today the weather is very good, the sky is very blue, not a little cloud. Mom and dad took me to the zoo, there are a lot of animals. There are lions, tigers, elephants, pandas, monkeys, deer, there are many birds I do not know the name, and scary snakes. We had fun all afternoon. After dinner at McDonald's, I got home seven o'clock.
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Hello,
Here's another way to correct this:
Went to the zoo / A trip to the zoo
Today the weather was very good, the sky was very blue, not even a little cloud/without a single cloud. Mom and dad took me to the zoo, there are a lot of animals there/there were a lot of animals. There are/were lions, tigers, elephants, pandas, monkeys, deer, there are/were many birds I do not know the names of, and scary snakes. We had fun all afternoon. After dinner at McDonald's, I got home at seven o'clock.Keep up the good work!
-Charlene ;)
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Going to the zoo
Today the weather is very good, the sky is very blue with not a single cloud. Mom and dad took me to the zoo, where there are a lot of animals. There are lions, tigers, elephants, pandas, monkeys, deer, there are many birds I do not know the name of, and scary snakes. We had fun all afternoon. After dinner at McDonald's, I got home at seven o'clock.0
Sounds like it was an amazing day. Your English is great, Keep up the good work!
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