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Business trip in Shanghai Maybe I will saty in Shanghai about tow months and work in Shanghai office. My job becomes more challenged than before. I have to control the whole project and also need to communicate with the customer as a key account manager. It is a big challenge for me and the work environment around me is not such friendly and seems a little embarrassed. So I have to work hard to face the challenge. I don't like to be pushed or have to push others to do something. It feels bad. But sometimes you have to do so, otherwise, maybe you will mess up on your job. Wish me a good luck. Anyway, please cheer yourself up. I must trust myself and never give up.

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Business Trip in Shanghai

Maybe I will saty stay in Shanghai about tow for two more months and work in the Shanghai office. My job becomes more challenged than before had become more challenging as . I have to control manage the whole project and also need to communicate with the customers as a key account manager. It is a big challenge for me, and the work environment around me is not such unfriendly and seems a little embarrassinged1. So I have to work harder to face the challenges. I don't like to be pushed or have to push others to do something i . It feels bad.2 But sometimes you have to do so, otherwise, maybe you will mess up on your job things will get messed up.


Wish me a good luck. Anyway, please cheer yourself up. I must trust myself and never give up.

1.  Need to explain why is it embarassing.  Perhaps you used the wrong word.  Write in Chinese if you need an accurate correction.

2. No need to explain here.  This your opinion and preference.  Besides it is understood in this context.

3.  In English do need for such phrases.  At the same time this is out of context.  Why are suddenly about someone else right in the middle of things about yourself.

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Hi there Daisy. I was in Shanghai in April, it was great. Why not post some questions in the Answers section at the top of this page? Italki members will be happy to help you.

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