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Letter Asking Information
Dear George,I am writing to you because I want to organize a visit to the historical exhibition in your town with a group of classmates. We are doing
First of all, I want to ask
Secondly, about regarding the exhibition´s entrance fee, I would like to know if is there any group discount available for big groups as we are a group of ten people.
And thirdly, Finally, could you recommend us a hotel? We are planning to spend the night there. It will be better if is not so much expensive due to the majority of us do not have job. We would prefer somewhere inexpensive as most of us (are students and) do not work.
I am looking forward to meeting you next week. Thank you very much for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Martín
Hi Martin, I have changed your letter to make it more formal and polite. :-) But this is a very good attempt.
(are students and) - explains the reason you want a cheaper hotel more clearly.
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