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Letter Asking Information Dear George, I am writing to you because I want to organize a visit to the historical exhibition in your town with a group of classmates. We have to do a project about the events that occurred there, so this will help us a lot to get a good grade. I will be really grateful if you could provide me with the next information. First of all, I want to ask you if you know which is the best way to go there from Washington. I heard that the train is the fastest one but It cost the triple of a bus ticket. From your experience, is it really worth it? When you come to Washington, how do you come back to your city? Secondly, about the exhibition´s entrance fee, I would like to know if is there any discount for big groups as we are ten people. And thirdly, could you recommend us a hotel? We are planning to spend the night there. It will be better if is not so much expensive due to the majority of us do not have job. I am looking forward to meet you next week. Thank you very much for you time. Yours sincerely, Martín

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Letter Asking Information

Dear George,

I am writing to you because I want to organize a visit to the historical exhibition in your town with a group of classmates. We are doing have to do a project about the events that occurred there, so this will help us greatly with our grades.  a lot to get a good grade. I will be really grateful if you could provide me with the next following information.

First of all, I want to ask you if you know which is the best way to go get there from Washington. I have heard that the train is the fastest one option but that It costs the triple the price of a bus ticket. From your experience, is it really worth it?  When you come to Washington, how do you come back to your city?  Can you suggest any other travel options?


Secondly, about regarding the exhibition´s entrance fee, I would like to know if is there any group discount available for big groups as we are a group of ten people.


And thirdly, Finally, could you recommend us a hotel? We are planning to spend the night there. It will be better if is not so much expensive due to the majority of us do not have job.  We would prefer somewhere inexpensive as most of us (are students and) do not work.


I am looking forward to meeting you next week. Thank you very much for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Martín

Hi Martin, I have changed your letter to make it more formal and polite.  :-)  But this is a very good attempt. 

 (are students and)  - explains the reason you want a cheaper hotel more clearly.

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