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Small victures Yesterday hapened a funny thigs... I was singing in shower. The music was the "Luck" of Colbie Caillet and Jason MraZ... Even though i dont know speak perfect English, i know sing this a music long time, but i didn't traslate.. did not know meaning... You understand? I sing the music without know meaning... But yesterday was different... i was there sing: "Do you hear me? I talk to you... across the water, across the deep, blue ocean under the open sky o my baby i'm trying..." Suddenly i noticed: I KNEW THE LETTER! And the music looks like more beautifull now! And the best: I UNDERSTAND WITH MY PRONUNCIATION... "Boy i hear you, in my dreams, i fell the wisper across the sea..." I'm so HAPPY ! Thanks by now

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Small victures

Yesterday hapened a funny thigs...
I was singing in shower. The music was the "Luck" of from Colbie Caillet and Jason MraZ...
Even though I do know speak perfect English, I knew how to sing this a music (Music is a general term used in phrases like sertanejo music, Padoge music, Brazilian music. Song is for canção) song for a long time, but I didn't traslate translate.. did not (didn't) know the meaning...
You understand? I sing the music without knowing the meaning...
But yesterday was different... I was there sing (I was singing? i'm not sure of the meaning you want to convey): "Do you hear me? I talk to you... across the water, across the deep, blue ocean under the open sky o my baby I'm trying..."
Suddenly I noticed: I KNEW THE LETTER! And the music looks like sounds more beautifull beautiful now!
And the best: I UNDERSTAND WITH MY PRONUNCIATION...
"Boy I hear you, in my dreams, I fell the wisper whisper across the sea..."
I'm so HAPPY !

Thanks by now for reading

I is always always always with capital letters.

the bit on green is a suggestion

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Hi Layza, here are some corrections :-)


Small victories

Yesterday, a few funny things happened....
I was singing in shower. The music was the "Luck" from Colbie Caillet and Jason MraZ...
Even though I know I don't speak perfect English, I have been singing this a music long time, but I didn't translate.. so I don't know meaning...
You understand? I sing the music without knowing meaning...
But yesterday was different... i was there singing: "Do you hear me? I talk to you... across the water, across the deep, blue ocean under the open sky o my baby i'm trying..."
Suddenly I noticed: I KNEW THE WORDS! And the music feels more beautiful now!
And the best: I UNDERSTAND WITH MY PRONUNCIATION...
"Boy i hear you, in my dreams, i fell the wisper across the sea..."
I'm so HAPPY !

Thanks by now
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Thanks guys♥
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Keep it up! Good work!
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good bracket:)

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