Go Shopping This noon, my daughter and I went to a department store which is next to the Taipei bus station. We ate Udon noodles and some deep fried food for lunch. The underground of the department i

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Go Shopping This noon, my daughter and I went to a department store which is next to the Taipei bus station. We ate Udon noodles and some deep fried food for lunch. The underground of the department is connected to the Taipei MRT station through an underground street. After lunch, we went shopping on the underground street. We saw many young people who wore costumes cosplayed as videogame characters. Maybe some people take cosplay as nonsense, but I think cosplay is really interesting. If I were a young man, I would join the cospaly activity as they did.

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Go Shopping

This afternoon, my daughter and I went to a department store which is next to the Taipei bus station. We ate Udon noodles and some deep fried food for lunch. The underground of the store is connected to the Taipei MRT station through an underground street. After lunch, we went shopping on the underground street. We saw many young people who wore costumes cosplaying as video game characters. Maybe some people take cosplay as nonsense, but I think it's really interesting. If I were a young man, I would cosplay too.

> I would join the cosplay activity as they did.
The ending of this sentence isn't wrong, it just sounds unnatural. I provided a correction to something that sounds more natural in my opinion.

Go Shopping

This noon, my daughter and I went to a department store which is next to the Taipei Bus Station. We ate udon noodles and some deep-fried food for lunch. The underground basement of the department store is connected to the Taipei MRT station through an underground street walkway. After lunch, we went shopping on in the that underground street walkway. We saw many young people who wore costumes cosplayed as cosplaying videogame characters. Maybe some people take cosplay as nonsense, but I think cosplay is really interesting. If I were a young man, I would have joined the cospaly cosplay activity as they did.

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