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The use of robot(revised)
At present, there is a widespread concern that an increasing number of robots are being used in more places wider space such as industry and people’s daily life.
Attitudes towards the current situation vary from person to person, some people hold that the wide application of robots will pose a have a negative influence since robots may function as human being may act as human beings, which can cause the lead to the unemployment of a certain a significant part of the population part of people.
Nevertheless, others believe that using robots can help to boost productivity. I am more inclined to the second opinion. The reason is as follows.
There is no doubt that robots are completing some work that should have been be finished by humans. Even so, it doesn’t mean robots can totally replace humans being in the workplace. On the contrary, robots can also help to create jobs. If you just turn your eyes only to industries, then, you’re wrong. The wide use of robots is creating jobs in areas such as the robot product, the seller of robot, and the maintainer of robot, etc. the manufacturing, sale and maintenance of robots. And with the development of robots, I am firmly convinced that robots will secure more markets (functions? roles?) both in industry and people’s daily life. Therefore, more jobs will be expectantly can be expected to be created as a result of robot development.
Let’s look forward to the new era, in which robots will help us more instead of impacting us negatively.
I've corrected most of the grammar (I think). That said, bear in mind that anyone reading this article will notice you're not a native speaker. There are several that while correct, are unusual. For example:
"There is no doubt that robots are completing some of the work that should have been finished by humans"
A more "natural" sentence would sound something like this: "There's no doubt robots are replacing humans in an increasing number of tasks"
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