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I screwed my monthly test! Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible , you can provide me some tips for math study too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed my math monthly test this afternoon ! Math is one of my biggest problem. It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievable low grade on one subject even you already spend plenty of painful time on it . What more upsets me is that my classmates always yelling after test“Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” But they eventually get a pretty high scores maybe with few mistakes. But when I said “I’m screwed” I mean what literally mean, like only get 40%scores.

Well ,part of reasons I keep getting low grade on math because I started to learning math from 2016, I didn’t learn math from 3rd grade to 9th grade for some special reasons. I started late than my classmates. But still, I really want to get better on this subject. It is a really important subject in school, it will effect my application for college. And it is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck!

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I screwed up my monthly test!

Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible , you can provide give me some tips for math study studying math too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed up my math monthly (better = monthly math) test this afternoon ! Math is one of my biggest problems.("One of" = more than one, so "problem" should be plural.)  It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievably low grades (You got low grades more than once so this should be plural.) on one subject even though you already spend plenty loads of painful (doesn't sound natural)  time on it . What more upsets me even more is that my classmates are always yelling after the test“Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” But they eventually get a pretty high scores maybe and have with few mistakes. But when I said say (because this has happened several times and might happen again, don't use the past tense) “I’m screwed” I mean what literally mean it! Like, I only get 40%scores of 40%.

Well ,part of the reasons I keep getting low grades on in math is because I only started to learning math from 2016. I didn’t learn math from 3rd grade to 9th grade for some special reasons. I started later than my classmates. But still, I really want to get better on in this subject. It is a really important subject in school, it will effect my application for college. And it is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck! (More natural.)

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I screwed my monthly test!

Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible, you can provide me some tips for math study too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed my math monthly test this afternoon! Math is one of my biggest problems. It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievably low grades in one subject even after you have already spent plenty a lot of painful time on it. What upsets me more is that my classmates are always yelling “Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” after the test, but they eventually get a pretty high score with only a maybe with few mistakes. But when I say  “I’m screwed” I mean it what literally mean, like because I will only get a score of about 40%.

Well, part of the reason I keep getting a low grade in math is that because I only started to learning math from 2016, I didn’t learn math from the 3rd grade to the 9th grade for some special reasons. I started later than my classmates. But even so, I really want to improve get better on this subject. It is a really important subject in school, that it will affect my college application. for college. And it is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck!

Good luck with the math Ada. What grade are you in now?

"I'm screwed" is not really polite language, where I am from anyway. :)

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Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible , you can provide me some tips for math study too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed up my monthly math test this afternoon! Math is one of my biggest problem areas. It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievably low grades on a subject even though you spend plenty of painful time on it. What upsets me even more is that my classmates always yell  “Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” after tests but they eventually get a pretty high scores with maybe only a few mistakes. When I said “I’m screwed” what I literally mean is that I have gotten like only get 40% scores.

Part of reason I keep getting low grades in math is that I only started learning math in 2016; I didn’t learn math from 3rd grade to 9th grade for some special reason. I started later than my classmates but I still really want to get better in this subject. Math is a really important subject in school and will affect my application for college. It is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck!

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I screwed up my monthly test!

Please help me check and correct this paragraph. Thank you! If it’s possible , you can provide me some tips for math study too! Thanks again!

Ahhhhhhhh! I just screwed up my math monthly test this afternoon ! Math is one of my biggest problems. It is really frustrating when you keep getting unbelievably low grades in one subject even though you already spend plenty of painful time on it . What upsets me more is that my classmates are always yelling after each test “Ah! I’m screwed! I’m done!” But they eventually get a pretty high score, maybe with a few mistakes. But when I say “I’m screwed” I mean what it literally means, like only getting 40%scores.

Well, part of reason I keep getting low grades in math is because I started learning math in 2016; I didn’t learn math from 3rd grade to 9th grade for some special reasons. I started later than my classmates. But still, I really want to get better in this subject. It is a really important subject in school; it will effect my application for college. And it is also a fundamental subject of natural science. I hope I’ll do better on my final. Wish me good luck!

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