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Homework: write an introduction about arranged marriages vs "love" marriages.

Nowadays, many of us inevitably face the question: "Do you want an arranged marriage or a 'love' marriage?" According to a survey, 74% of Indians still prefer arranged marriages. However, with changing concepts of society, other Indians think that a "love" marriage is better than an arranged marriage.And Statistics show that the global divorce rate there is only has 6%, so it seems like arranged marriages are more successful than "love" marriages, but the divorce rate for arranged marriages has doubled in the last five years. Therefore, from my own perspective, arranged marriages don't really work and marriages should be based on "love".

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I wasn't 100% sure what you were trying to say with this sentence, so I tried to edit it as best as I could: "And statistics show that the global divorce rate there only has 6 percent.It seem like that arranged marriages are more successful that "love" marriages,but the divorce rate for arranged marriages has doubled in the last five years."

Are you saying the global divorce rate for arranged marriages had been only 6%, but now have doubled in the past 5 years? If so, then your sentence would like this:

In the past, statistics showed that the global divorce rate was only 6%, so it seemed like arranged marriages were more successful than "love" marriages, but the divorce rate for arranged marriages has doubled in the last five years.

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